by iraussieguy
Very good! I really liked the romantic side of this. Serendipity is always a great key to erotic encounters. I generally like your stories, obviously some more than others, but this is one of the best. Thanks
Jim D
So when do we get part 2??? Soon I hope! this one was just GREAT!!
Just amazing to "hear" you write a story from the doms perspective :)Thank you Sir
I like the way you've let their relationship develop at a natural pace. You've created two quite believable characters and let them interact very well.
I'm looking foreward to subsequent chapters!
Great story. Nice character buildup and like how the sex evolves from romantic to a bit more experimental. Truly worthy of a news headline!
Great story, too bad that we probably never see part 2 as this was written over 18 years ago. Still gets my 5++star vote.