by Salubrith
But really sad. everyone dies, or is cold, or is enslaved. a downer, but written well
Well written and the story is grabbing. I don't think this should be the end of and there has to be another chapter.
I will have to be honest with you; I really enjoyed the story. But, I don't believe that there should be chapter 2 because this should be chapter 2 or 12. This could be the end of the book. These are just my opinions but I really enjoyed the story.
Keep it Up.