All Comments on 'Princess Ch. 02'

You have done it again. I am addicted and need more!!!!

i don't leave many comments, but this time i was about to.... but you beat me to it...Mr Wallace, another great story.. can't wait for the next chapter...

Polyamorous, another word for befuddled, bewildered, besotted in multiples.

Yep, you got me addicted to this story and want more. I also want to be Marjorie oh my. , , , Got really turned on with this story....

a King or Queen is " Your Majesty "

a prince or princess is " Your Highness "

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only princes or princesses of the "direct line" ( offspring of the Heir to the throne )

would be obliged to have a public role & be engaged in Royal business.

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lesser princes & princesses can & do choose any path in life that they so wish

no pressures , no expectations , no requirements..

for reference:

princess royal .. her royal highness princess Anne

& her two children .. Zara & Peter.

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also

Princess Beatrice and Princess Eugenie Of York

( children of prince Andrew / duke of york. )

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and finaly

HRH prince Harry.

( freed from the shackles of duty , now that his brother has produced the obligatory Heir & a spare )

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i liked the start of the story , princess decides to abscond , see & experience the world Anonymously .. however it soon became apparent that the plot is somewhat thin

and poorly researched.

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what started out as a romance , descends into teen wank fantasy

I would agree with the previous Anonymous poster, but I would add that the story is shaping up to be very good "teen wank fantasy," and that I therefore fail to see the problem. :P

My only criticism thus far is that Jim is American, yet he uses British rather than American vocabulary on a fairly frequent basis. "Knickers" instead of "panties," to take the first instance that caught my eye in Ch01.

Anyway, I'm going to keep reading. Well done thus far! :)

Nope. No sharing with other men and almost drop Carrie and Marge because they’ve already connected behind his back in a cheating sort of way.