by ffreak
This works well; you have a sympathetic protagonist and an almost-naughty situation that is well written. Both the background and the sex itself held my attention.
This story begs for another chapter. When you like the characters as much as I did, you want to know how they make out in life. Hope you consider it. By the by, it was also pretty damn hot!
This was a wonderful "coming of age" story and I quite enjoyed it. The writing was consistent and clear and the characters well drawn. Its been quite a long time since it was written and so I guess there's little chance we'll see another chapter. Quite a shame as talent like this needs to be shared. Great job!!
That was one of the hottest stories I've read in a long time.. made my pussy wet and my fingers slick.. ;)