All Comments on 'Princess in Peril'

Outstanding! Fantastic buildup and portrayal of emotions!

Only wish it was longer. Really hoping the absence of a "Pt. 1" doesn't mean this is a stand alone.

Need to know what happens next to Allysandra and Rebekah! That woodsman might feel guilty now, but now he knows where to find them, and he's definitely going to be non-stop thinking of them and what else he could do to them! And two castle girls will make very slow and easy to track progress through his woods!

So much potential! Please keep writing!