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All Comments on 'Princil's Magic Ch. 01'

by kurtrellians

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

The low rating is probably down to heavy infodumping, and a stilted old timey mode of speech, which is just not a popular choice or what most readers are used to.

The plot is a bit sudden but it is not a bad plot for a first chapter.

JagnagJagnagalmost 5 years ago
Interesting start

All sounds good to start with ... looking forward to much more magic :)

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