All Comments on 'Prison Pet Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
taking it too far

I enjoyed the other 3 parts to this story but eating shit and other shit scenes in this one went way too far.

For me you also changed the whole dynamic of this prisons hierarchy and switched blair into the top dog not so sure how I like that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

loved the quirk in the story can't wait for the next excerpt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
excellent

can't wait for the next part, maybe i'm as bad as erica this turned me on big time

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
That was to fucking far

Seriously making her eat someone else's shit? She is guaranteed to get violently I'll from that without a doubt. And making her bleed? So much for the no lasting harm rule. Also NO ONE is this much of a natural sub and still able to function in normal life. They would do anything anyone ever asked of them if it is that easy to make them eat someone's shit. You obviously know what score I give this chapter

Cindy1001Cindy1001over 6 years ago
Too much and too far

Too far for me as well (the shit), but I kept reading because as a whole, the story really has something.

ready52ready52over 4 years ago
Disappointing

Cutting off her hair is fine, eating crap is taking it way beyond too far. I started skipping paragraphs. Very disappointed in the chapter - scored you a 1, and wonder why anyone would score you so high as to keep the chapter score average over a 4!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Love scat

I loved the blumpkin part. and de cleaning shiit. Keep it going 5 stars

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