by GayTripper
I enjoyed the other 3 parts to this story but eating shit and other shit scenes in this one went way too far.
For me you also changed the whole dynamic of this prisons hierarchy and switched blair into the top dog not so sure how I like that.
can't wait for the next part, maybe i'm as bad as erica this turned me on big time
Seriously making her eat someone else's shit? She is guaranteed to get violently I'll from that without a doubt. And making her bleed? So much for the no lasting harm rule. Also NO ONE is this much of a natural sub and still able to function in normal life. They would do anything anyone ever asked of them if it is that easy to make them eat someone's shit. You obviously know what score I give this chapter
Too far for me as well (the shit), but I kept reading because as a whole, the story really has something.
Cutting off her hair is fine, eating crap is taking it way beyond too far. I started skipping paragraphs. Very disappointed in the chapter - scored you a 1, and wonder why anyone would score you so high as to keep the chapter score average over a 4!
I loved the blumpkin part. and de cleaning shiit. Keep it going 5 stars