All Comments on 'Prisoner Ch. 04'

What to say?

I had almost been happy for him. Am I almost sad for him? I don't know.

I love that you added Miss' inner dialogue. But I'm confused: why would she abuse him if there was nothing behind it? Isn't that just savagery? I'm probably wrong and will go back and re-read. 5 Stars. Flawless writing, compelling story. If there was a sort of vacation like the Villa, I would pay big money to go be objectified for a week or two. #sigh.

The characterization is superbly nuanced, letting us into the minds of Andre and A. The style is somewhat noir-ish. I like everything about your stories, but in this one, the callousness and harsh treatment does cross a few lines.

You still get 5 stars.

of character for Andre to act this way!!! TESTOSTERONE??? I sure hope so.

Love this story, although I never thought I would be reading something like this. 55*