All Comments on 'Prisoner in his Harem Ch. 07'

by RubiaLaFaye

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RubiaLaFayeRubiaLaFayeabout 8 years agoAuthor
New version of previous chapter

For the loyal fans: chapter 6 is revised and extended.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great story. Well done!

I read all the chapters and re-read. Please continue writing. You are a talented writer. Please continue to share that talent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
An impressive blend of culturally atypical characters!

It is so impressive how all of the characters in the story are a complete contridiction of the typical person in their given roles/heritage. I'd love the opportunity to comment so much more please, after sleeping on it ;) ยง

RubiaLaFayeRubiaLaFayeabout 8 years agoAuthor
Intrigued to hear it

Please do share your extended review Anonymous. I might make a book out of it so all help is very welcome.

BMSMABMSMAabout 8 years ago
Please continue!

I hope you continue on with this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Amaziiing

Tastefully written; suggestion for the baby's name: Amir.

I like how you ended it here.

RubiaLaFayeRubiaLaFayealmost 8 years agoAuthor
e-book

You might like to hear that one of the editors here and I are making this story into an ebook with many extra chapters. I will keep you posted.

RubiaLaFayeRubiaLaFayeover 7 years agoAuthor
Want to know what happened after?

This story is rewritten in a full length novel and an epilogue is added to it. You can find it on Amazon as "Rosebud and the Sheikh".

Do you want to know why the Sheikh has a harem but none of the women are getting pregnant?

What she did before he put her in his harem?

Why Rosebud falls in love with him?

If she will be happy in the long run?

If she gets another child?

Read the book :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I LOVED THIS STORY!!! YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB, AND PLEASE WRITE MORE OF THIS ENGAGING STORY.

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