All Comments on 'Prisoners' Revenge Ch. 01'
by PleasureBot69
- 8 Comments
Anonymousover 14 years agoYour writing style is superb. Your characters are well drawn and nastily realistic.
Anonymousover 14 years agothat was the best story I've read in a long time, I can't wait for the next part please don't leave us hanging too long
Anonymousover 14 years agoIt's pretty good, especially the escape attempt. It gives a small twist. Please continue with more chapters.
Anonymousover 14 years agoI love the part when she i mad to humiliate herself in front of the door. Now that they have photo's - more public humiliation please!
Anonymousabout 4 years agoThey are leaving a lot of physical evidence in her.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoFrom a standpoint of the place where this takes action. No way would a cop end up going it alone. There are layers of agencies that have specific ways of dealing with kidnappings. So the actions for the cop, including carrying a gun she knows will be useless makes no sense. As to the bad guys, agree with the comments about their not being too smart but the cop herself may have acting even worse.
This is a story where you feel like you are hearing a recording. There is so much talk. It seems more like a showcase for writing skill than about the heart of the matter. It would have been better to jump into the action and then do flashbacks. These characters are more like doing a play with all of these references and song and dance.
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