All Comments on 'Private Dick'

This is the first story of yours I have read and it was absolutely brilliant.

SO well done. I'm jealous.

Thank you for this! Abi

Top notch! Love the hard boiled dick!

What a great follow up to your first story!!! We just both really enjoyed it a whole lot!!! We will be ... re-reading it later again!!!!

just fantastic. I so wanted to be Liz (hey I'm English so part way there!)

Whew! That was intense! Please keep writing!

But I did here. Only one tiny error (your instead of her) in a hot, short story with enough background to give it depth. Well done.

Loved it wish it hadn't ended there plenty of room for more hot sex

Just simply 1-of the best 2-page Lesbian stories on thus site in many years. Intriguing start at Ruby's followed by "Red Hot Sex". Want more stories of Dani's exploits from you expeditiously if feasible.

Definitely 5*Stars All The Way!!

I concur with one of the other commenters. This is one of the best short stories in the lesbian section. Your story was very well written and absolutely plausible. I would enjoy a sequel in which Liz wears "Big Girl".

Great start. I hope you plan to continue. This has the potential for a good series. Love happy endings.

This was incredibly hot and exactly what I want in erotica - real characters, real interaction. Definitely hope to read more from you!

Such a well put together erotic story! One can only hope that you'll continue with these two and let them find something truly magical together! Thank you!

This was raw and powerful. There was a grit to it that at first seemed too much, but after a bit, was entirely appropriate.

Loved it, but there were many misspellings that should have been caught.

I LOVED ur story!! THANK YOU for sharing this! I have been turned on quite a bit while reading erotica. This is however the first time I had suddenly realized that at some point while reading my hips started to gyrate (quite aggressively I might add)! I would abso love to read more chapters about these two beauties. U have a great talent I REALLY appreciate u sharing ur story. Thank u again🤤😋😉❤️

The setting was obviously one where action was the name of the game and a pairing was there for the taking. Elizabeth went to that particular bar with a need and Dani was there to meet it. There were some surprises along the way with Liz taking the initiative in the alley and Dani using bondage.Dani licking her pussy was a great beginning and big girl was used front and back resulting in orgasms for both. I totally enjoyed the story line but would have liked a bit more information on Liz's background and why she would seek out this bar. All in all, it was well written and the author must be an English major. My compliments for a wonderful story that kept me engrossed.

Thank you for pointing me to this excellent story. One that despite the initial setting of somewhere a little seedy, transferred to more intimate surroundings. The 'foreplay' having already happened, the sex is deliciously and delightfully detailed. Strong in every sense, highly erotic and beautifully written. It hit 'the spot' for me.:p SYLVIE

A lovely romp and very hot. Gave enough hints of background to allow for further expansion in the future. As a writer myself I won't take away from your glory (hence anonymous) as people should read more of your work, it's very good.

Interesting story, but problematic handling of racial issues made me bail. 2 stars

yo what's with the racist stuff on the first page? had to bounce after seeing that

The Downton staff are largely local Yorkshire folk who have Cockney accents in the same way people from 1920s Georgia had Brooklyn accents

My GF and i read the story curled up together in bed. It was a sexy and exciting 5 star read. Then we wrestled, i lost in about 10 seconds, took a spanking (which was not in the story!) then She used her strap on and i screamed and begged (in everyway that is good) when She lubed my bottom before taking it. We love acting out some stories, and this was certainly one of the best!

I just hope that when Liz went home after that wonderful week that hearts were not broken. You can fall in love in a week. If my GF had left me after our first week i would have cried so hard, and we were not making love and sleeping together every night!