All Comments on 'Private, Don't Look Ch. 06'

Wow! I loved the pegging part! My Grampy dick is hard as a rock right now. I hope Grandma fucks my ass.

I liked everything but the pegging and really hope its not something thats continued. Normally would give 5 stars but not now.

i could have done without the pegging as well. that killed it quick.

Thanks for the honest feedback.

This story touches upon many different forms of sexual gratification. I realize that the result is that at some point I may exceed the boundaries of some readers. I will admit that I vacillated quite a bit about this scene where Charlie gets pegged. Eventually I decided to leave it in, even at the risk of offending some readers.

I hope you continue reading and enjoy other parts.

Contrary to the others I Loved that You included this part ;)

Although most may not admit it NONE of them would have protested... Once they voiced their Objections ( half heartedly ) lol, All would have Gladly submitted, and if they then were Truthful, They would ask 'When can we do that again' ;)))

It was not a DP. A DP is pussy and anal penetration.

It's a great story, Very hot ! and a great story line - how they got to where they are today is a great progression. The early chapters were well edited. You seem more rushed with them now and missing

things. In the first 5 chapters they lived in a dorm, now they had an apartment !?! Many other little flaws.

I also agree with "Anonymous" comment about DP, she was spit roasted. but now that anal has been introduced maybe true DP is in the future. As for the comments about Charlie getting pegged. This was with a dildo, and many pure hetero couples and should not be considered gay.