All Comments on 'Private Lessons with Mrs. Burdeck'

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pubelesspubelessalmost 4 years ago
Hot story.

Hope there is a follow up to this hot story. She could make him her fuck toy.

rdoolittlerdoolittlealmost 4 years ago
What's the hurry?

Good but felt rushed toward the end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great start!

I hope to see more chapters of this! Could be a fun exercise in PE, stamina training, edging, mild/loving dominance and more titfucks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Omfg continue

Damn this waa hot. We want more of this genre and this type.

AndrewxXxAndrewxXxover 3 years ago
part 2?

hoping for part 2 and maybe even more, because this was great :)

FluidswallowerFluidswallower10 months ago

More please, PLEEEEASE???? Mommy is delightfully sexy and highly arousing! Well, she's sure got me aroused, that's for sure!! Well-written, thank you!

TavernerTaverner10 months ago

If that is your first story, it was very well done. An interesting premise, and good descriptions of the action. Pretty hot, as well.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

You need a proofreader or editor.

Your use of the contrast idea with the parents not being home "much less in state" wasn't how you use the :much less" construction...

And - "Too relaxed was he" - trying for a Yoda thing there?... Doesn't work well...

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