by MooMooTube27
Hope there is a follow up to this hot story. She could make him her fuck toy.
I hope to see more chapters of this! Could be a fun exercise in PE, stamina training, edging, mild/loving dominance and more titfucks.
More please, PLEEEEASE???? Mommy is delightfully sexy and highly arousing! Well, she's sure got me aroused, that's for sure!! Well-written, thank you!
If that is your first story, it was very well done. An interesting premise, and good descriptions of the action. Pretty hot, as well.
You need a proofreader or editor.
Your use of the contrast idea with the parents not being home "much less in state" wasn't how you use the :much less" construction...
And - "Too relaxed was he" - trying for a Yoda thing there?... Doesn't work well...