All Comments on 'Prize or Penalty Ch. 03: Back for More'

All around naughty and creative.

It's all good fun.

I love your stories, I’ve tried to pm you without success, I expect you’re inundated, but you have a wonderful way of making me care for your characters, regardless of their bizarre situations, just superb writing.

Many thanks for the praise - I thrive on it... :-)

I've been responding to PMs recently. I'm always happy to talk about writing.

Hey, I left a feedback some days back, but not sure it came through, so I’ll add a comment. Great work, oh god I love it. I’m a sucker for chastity and games, so a game show involving chastity kicks me so hard... please add more episodes, more candidates, but also more background info, how do the mods/mutations work, how long does the chastity last (permanent?). How did the losers cope with the losses, maybe flashbacks to earlier contestants, or stories from a different perspective. I.e. who stocks the penalties, random or a designed round? I was a bit disappointed that the trigger word was in the same game set as the chastity belt, as it renders it so much less useful as penalty. Even the game host was a bit sad about that. But please keep up adding to this story line. A great fan, Pete

Hi Pete, I'll have a think about it. This one was mostly intended as fun and lightly romantic. But chastity belts are always fun to write about.

Love the logical and natural growth of complexity in the rivalries before an audience.