All Comments on 'Problem with a One Night Stand Ch. 06'

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Hutchison12Hutchison12over 6 years ago
That was fantastic

Thank you, what a fantastic chapter, absolutely loved it. Also so happy for you’re brother and you’re new life in Texas, thank you again and have a fantastic day

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

You are an amazing writer! Exceptional chapter filled with details. You have a gift for moving the story forward with out sacrificing character development. Every time I wonder how you will resolve a situation, you do so seemly effortlessly. Barry is so good for Josh and I really like how Josh is opening up, albeit slowly, about his past. I was also happy to see Josh’s dad is more in tune with him. I look forward to the next chapter.

TesaoboyTesaoboyover 6 years ago
Wow!

Hot and sweet and incredibly endearing. Such a great chapter, and your beautiful writing held me captivated. Guess I’m kind of holding my breath for Josh - hoping that this relationship is the real deal. It certainly seems to be.

I’m always excited when I see an update to your stories, and this was worth the wait. So glad to hear that your brother is doing well and that you’re well settled in Texas.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Holy Shit!!!

This story although quite good, feels over the top, and somewhat unrealistic a good share of the time! Good God... its about time something seems to be working out for Josh! Even though his own insecurities, lack of good judgement, and his inability to control his sexual desires are always what lead to his pain and suffering. One can only tolerate seeing a guy being used and tortured for so long!!! With the theme of suffering seeming to be the bulk of this entire story, I'm not sure it will last even now with Barry, as there is always something bad about to blow up in this poor insecure guys face. I always enjoy some good drama, real life is not easy, especially for gay college guys trying to find there way, but Fuck this story is like riding the craziest roller coaster built! Hoping to eventually see another chapter posted. The writing is creative, even tho it seems a little bit unrealistic at times. It would be refreshing to see Josh grow up a bit, in a healthy relationship for a while, maybe he can even heal from some of the trauma from a lonely childhood and his poor choices with User, Creepy-Assholes that only take advantage of his desperate need to feel loved and appreciated. He seems to have a magnetic pull to bad people!!! Looking forward to reading more........

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Need more

I need more of a closure in these stories. I need to know how Josh and Barry's life as Barry has graduated and Josh still in college. I Need more from Matt and Jason as well. Maybe as they are now all graduated and out in the real world. Even if you don't these were great stories. Thank-You.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Below expectations

You are a great writer you just dragged it out for too long and with a dude who was to become irrelevant then finished it off too fast. It just does not meet the previous story level. But all in all thanks for sharing. I have no grounds to criticize am not a writer just a simple note.

Orion_Orion_almost 6 years ago
Disappointing

This author has a tendency to leave the stories hanging for long periods of time. She did the same with Woodbridge Academy and now look here. No posts since December 2017.

I have made a mental note of never reading her stories until the final chapter is posted otherwise it's quite frustrating to keep checking for an update. One even forgets the plotline and the flow is always distorted

DustyDevilDustyDevilalmost 6 years ago
Excellent Reading

Great story. I would rate 3 of five stars. Personally I would rate Woodbridge Academy as a five star story. Seemed to me to be better written and perhaps the characters a little more believable .

Awkward12Awkward12over 5 years ago

Please update. Love this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I love Josh & I’m happy to see he’s found someone who deserves him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Update?

Love your writing and stories but do you really have to leave us all hanging for so long very dissapointing come on update and give your readers who have invested in you some closure with an ending otherwise you will lose your readers and if you post new stories no one will bother reading if you don't finish it's frustrating and unprofessional so pl update

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Would love to see this finished!

No rush, of course. Life gets the best of even the most dedicated of qriters. I’ve just always loved Josh, and now I love Barry too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Please finish! I’m dying to find out what happens next!

DustyDevilDustyDevilalmost 4 years ago
Great Soap Opera Material both stories

Both of your stories are 5 star writing . You are one of the few authors that seem to understand that there needs to be a balance between story and sex. You hit the mark right on the button. I have reread this series several times over and still like to come back to it. I am hoping that we can look forward to more of your writing in the future. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Great Chapter. Hot sex! What's not to like!

I loved this chapter. Lots of drama yes but resolved for the most part. Great sex in the limo and back in the dorm. Don't agree with those who are negative. Really hope elno2015 that you are still "out there" and will add more chapters. Barry is still a full semester from finishing and the other characters are just freshmen. Please Continue! cp

DustyDevilDustyDevilalmost 3 years ago

Still hoping for a conclusion to this story. I would hope that you would consider publishing a conclusion to this story. I think that others express the same. Thanks

Richian28Richian28over 2 years ago

Read all your stories and loved how you get the balance right between the story of these two and the sex , i hope you can finish this series off, i think there is so much left to write about Josh and Barry. 👍

DustyDevilDustyDevilabout 2 years ago

As per my previous comment I am still hoping that you will publish a sequel or conclusion to this story . My opinion is that it is in the top 10 of stories on this site.

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