All Comments on 'Problem with Mark Ch. 01'

You desperately need someone to edit. Sooooooo many mistakes. It might have been a decent story if I didn't have to mentally read beyond all this misspelled and misplaced words.

Might want to repeat sex ed 1. Who the fuck is Tanya? Too many dumb mistakes.

Can you pls tell more of how big Marry actually is

Wanted to read, but couldn't get past the fact that the husband's name was Steven Stevens. Figured the creativity that followed wouldn't have been much better.

Want the story to continue.. Eagerly waiting for next parts. Hope it will be a very long story.

It would be best if you got a proofreader to read your stories before you submit them as this story had to many mistakes but it was good after you had to ignore the mistakes

Marry is a big mistake

A vagina is not a womb!