by LostSoulz
A few errors, called him something other than Grant one time, and it came off a a little repetitive at times. But it was a good one, keep up the writing!
continue with story
mother is still young came in her no protection
would enjoy reading more
son take's his mom to opening night as his date and only have eyes for each other
go back home and make passionate love with him eating her
then filling her fertile womb over and over.
Foot long cocks, KK tits that touch when wrapped around son, cock width bigger then a beer can. PT Barnum would put these people in a freak show. Normal size sex organs and this story would work, now it heads for the trash bin.
The story had holes but all together not bad. Only issue is the condom tripe, condoms can stretch over a foot in diameter and up to six feet long, using that classic cliche line of "I cant get one that fits" is just irritating.
A few small grammatical errors, but great story overall. I'm a boob man myself, a d loved the story. KK cup tits? Holy cow! Never seen any that big that I know of, would love for you to continue, please!
Great progression of events with both mother and son realizing their attractions. More mothers need to be honest with their desires because most sons are.
I admit it.
Unknown woman has been her friend for years and her name is Fay. How can she be unknown?
Doesn't bode well for the rest of the story.
I know it's fiction however, you took it way too far. A 13 inch dick, and beer can thick, and her 32kk tits? Unrealistic and it things the story.
32KK tits aren't unrealistic, I know a woman with natural 34M tits.
Also @LostSoulz you keep changing the main characters names in your stories went from Gavin to Grant on the last page. Don't get me wrong, I love the stories and you're one of the few writers who actually understand "Huge" tits and know that there are sizes above DD, but a bit more consistency with the names would be appreciated.
That was the most erotic story that I have EVER read! I let my cuckold husband read it and I let him make love to me over and over again! My pussy is so sore but totally satisfied. The problem is I want to find a young man with a thick 12 1/2" cock to use me.
Thank you and please keep writing these horny stories. I have 46FF breasts that give wonderful titty fucks.
Cathy
Great story. Love that all your stories have women with gigantic breasts