All Comments on 'Proctor and Gamble'

There's talent in the writing, hot description of attacker, a little brutal though.

Nicely written, but we need to know where this story is going. More importantly, does Nodgette know where this story is heading. It is difficult to tell at this point.

Cut dock and I'm done. Just my opinion.

Is there another chapter coming out? i like this story. Very brutal. Hot. But..needs to slow down and more description and you'd win me over even more. Im looking forward to more 😀

It was just getting good!