by EvilPinkSocks
I thought that the text was very well written. The story was completely unbelievable. I had serious problems even trying to attach a reality point to this story. But if I suspend my disbelief, what is there is very well written (in terms of punctuation and grammar). I did feel that the story was mis-categorized. I would have put it under non-consent/reluctance. Based on this, I would read more from you, but if this is any indication, I don't know if I will add you to my watch list.
~Paul