by melonysanable
Well written commencement to an interesting theme. Please do not be tempted to go too fast.
The comparison to Twilight was interesting. I loved Twilight, but it would have been better if Edward Cullen was a bit more dominant. I look forward to reading more.
This chapter belongs in Non-Erotic. Hopefully, the next chapter has more BDSM. Fantastic introduction to the characters and story!
Can't wait to read the next chapter...
Make me hot and wonder what he's gonnna do to her...
This is nice. Well written and a good buildup. Looking forward to reading further.
Brilliant writing. So sad that there isn’t any more parts published. I want more of Professor Hoyt. 😭
3 years ago? And such an interesting beginning! Ah, well. We do have other lives. Thanks for the first chapter, anyway. I gave it 5*.