All Comments on 'Professor Hoyt Pt. 01'

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curiouscarolecuriouscaroleabout 6 years ago
Fine start

Well written commencement to an interesting theme. Please do not be tempted to go too fast.

JudyLeeJudyLeeabout 6 years ago
Good beginning.

The comparison to Twilight was interesting. I loved Twilight, but it would have been better if Edward Cullen was a bit more dominant. I look forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wrong category......

This chapter belongs in Non-Erotic. Hopefully, the next chapter has more BDSM. Fantastic introduction to the characters and story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Can't wait to read the next chapter...

Make me hot and wonder what he's gonnna do to her...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
please make more

I loved it! Really intriguing please make more (:

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

So good! Left me a bit hot and bothered haha

sapna_prakashsapna_prakashalmost 6 years ago

This is nice. Well written and a good buildup. Looking forward to reading further.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Amazing!!

Brilliant writing. So sad that there isn’t any more parts published. I want more of Professor Hoyt. 😭

OldnotDead71OldnotDead71about 3 years ago
Oh, come on!

3 years ago? And such an interesting beginning! Ah, well. We do have other lives. Thanks for the first chapter, anyway. I gave it 5*.

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