All Comments on 'Professor Kane's Erotic Dreams'

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FaithWhiteFaithWhiteover 14 years ago
Loved it!!!

I actually cried out in despair at end and my sister came running asking me what was wrong - i want more and there isn't any! She rolled her eyes and left.

hongluobohongluoboover 14 years ago
Delicious

what a sweet and wonderful story!! well drawn out.. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
great!

This story has a Pygmalion-like charm. The fact that the mouse turned into an angel was like the cherry on the sundae.

jalapamajalapamaover 14 years ago
Loved this story!

Very nicely done. There was a bit of a disconnect between the kiss on Friday night and what happened on Sunday. I quickly got back in the story, however, and enjoyed it to the finish.

WiggyPhilWiggyPhilabout 14 years ago
Soo sweet story!

Thanks for the lovely role-playing story!

ephraimephraimover 13 years ago
Excelent

Good characterization, great story flow tender, warm, affectionate older-man and younger-woman plot. Narrative drew the reader into your story. I felt immersed and engrossed. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great

rashi शुक्ल ने मुझे ऐसा नहीं कह सकते में ध्यान देने वाला एक एलेवेटर पर छड़ी rutgers है ... । मॅँ मेरे शिश्न ने उसके मुख और उसने उसके चेहरे पर शुक्राणु डाल दिया जाता है । अगर वह चाहती है कि चित्र, उन्हें वेतन!

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