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To Be Continued...
We all love your story so much!! The old adage of “show, don’t tell” is perfectly displayed in your writing and we’d love to get the rest of your story!! I just read all 3 chapters in about 20 minutes so I’m ready for more!!
There must be a conclusion to this story - please. How James is sooo sorry??
Hey, everyone, I'm sorry I haven't posted the next chapter yet. I am almost finished with it, and I plan to post it soon. I really want to thank all of you for taking the time to read it and offer your feedback. I hope you'll enjoy what comes next just as much.
Thanks again,
-Steve
I see that this will take some time for both to adjust to. I look forward to hearing from you again. ^^
...to see James and Dom reunite. I know in an ideal world, James would marry Caroline and Dom would explore his sexuality and find someone. But can Dom graduate, and then begin a relationship with James? They seem to fit so well together here. I just love your descriptions of both guys... James' hairy chest and body seems delicious! To me, they deserve another shot -- with open honesty and love flowing freely!
Are you ever going to come back to this? It's been almost a year. So frustrating when the authors here start great stories, then don't finish them ...
I keep checking constantly for more to this story only to be left wanting. Please, Please can we have some more and soon
Your work is amazing. I can see where some readers are begging you to "get to the action!" but I love all the little nuances, and I love being in the minds of your two protagonists. I've got to say that the fantasy scene in Chapter 3 is about the best one I've ever read. (Somebody please tell the earlier poster that it's highly likely that Father's walk-in was fantasy--not in the reality of the story. At least that was my take on it.) Now...when do we get the next chapter?!
Hey everyone,
Sorry about the hold up with posting the next part of the story. I've been a bit busy lately with a vacation that I took and then catching up on the course work I missed during that time, work, and now I'm going in for surgery this week. I haven't forgotten, and I plan on posting the next part very soon along with one or two other short one-part stories I wrote for fun. I really appreciate all the comments and feedback everyone's been giving, and thank you so much again for reading. You're all awesome.
Best Wishes,
Steve
I have to say I love the way the story is unfolding, especially because of the way you are developing your characters feelings and personalities. Please do post the 4th part, don't give up!!!
Implication of the empty garage was that no one was home. Then suddenly Dad appears. No explanation of this. Still looking forward to where this goes but there are more downs than ups right now. I too prefer HEA.