by rougechapeau
Spanking and anal are two of My favorite things... Mmm.. Very well-written to My eye. I LOVE the "build up" the mental/emotional edges. I truly got a sense of the feeling of love, passion and power. The trust? Mmm.. Delicious, simply frosting on a well-written and "nasty-hot" spanking and anal scene. (The oral wasn't bad either!)
Thanks again - more please?
Reading a story of a spankin' is always fun but to have anal and spankin in the same story and so wonderfully written was a real joy. I enjoyed it immensely. Hope you write more like this.
angelx
i was in the mood for some hot anal fics but to find this little gem with a good helping of spanking too was just awesome...two of my favourite things. the first person was great too, made me feel right in the action and the build up had my pulse racing and my pussy wet.
nicely done
Lots of promise, but the dialog just didn't do anything for me.