All Comments on 'Promises, Promises'

Thanks for the story... as a 1st attempt its really good......but, for me its too short, felt a bit rushd and couldve done with 'more' but the main thing id like in the next story which id hope ud do....soon, is, too have the thoughts of the other person' worded' out like the ones from your main character 'maddie'. So we know what katie is thinking in her head when things happen.. when they kissed we only 'heard' from maddie not katie which was a shame. Better too get it from both parties. But i really enjoyed it.

I think it was a great story and I hope you decide to share more with all of us!

If you're actually a woman, how do you not know that the number in a bra size has nothing to do with the size of her tits (ppl drooled over her 38c chest)? I agree it felt rushed and the grammar is bad (I had to work to understand what you were trying to say, which distracted from the story).

What a lovely story. Well done with so much feeling. Will you give us more on these three people ? I hope so. Loved it thanks

I liked it.

I thought that the story was well written for the most part and quite touching as a romance, but I thought the character of Henry, the boyfriend, was written so that Maddie would have turned to someone else eventually. Having Henry away from Maddie for months on end only could lead to her finding someone to be with her. In this case it was her female best friend from college Katie, but it could just as easily have been another guy if the author had wanted to go that direction.

By the way, what is a religious consultant, what would one of them do, and why would the government need one?

And the timing of her pregnancy when she was asked by Katie how far along she was and her answer was 8 weeks. She hadn't talked to Katie in 7 weeks prior to that and Henry had been gone for several weeks before that. Timing didn't add up. And Henry signing off on giving up his parental rights was skimmed over pretty quickly. I doubt that Henry would have tossed his first child away so easily.

Lovely fantasy. A girl who has everything – the job, the education, the hot guy, a body that is one step down from to die for...

Sorry.

I got about two thirds down the first page and realised that I really didn’t want to read the fictional equivalent of the sex life of one of the beautiful people, or the Kardashians or some other wannabe celebrity who already has everything. You know, there is something about having how little and ordinary you are rubbed in your face when you read about how successful in life and love a character is in a sex story.

Also... Does the comma (,) key not work on your keyboard? There were several sentences that, were you to try speaking them out loud, might make you black out from oxygen starvation. Most of the rest of what I read was alright as far as punctuation goes, it just wasn’t for me.

I’ve read this story twice now, I love your writing style...depth of charters and great sex scenes that are classy and hot ! I would love for you to write a sequel and let us know how Maddie and Katie are getting along being parents etc

Like a man is going to sign over all his rights when it comes to his child she needs to put it up for adoption because she would definitely be a unfit mother that’s why I say that women or weak because that’s not the type of shit men do you will never leave a man and his best friend together then come back in he’s leaving because he’s gay only in women’s world