All Comments on 'Promises Pt. 02'

The first two chapters are great. I can’t wait for the rest. Thanks.

I love this story. I really look forward to the next installment.

you have done well. love this story

Hummmm..... sounds like she's married to a mobster type with that last name...could be an interesting twist....kind of neat too that he find her to be a published author and he's read her books. He did say she looked familiar when he asked to use her phone to win the trip. Don't wait so long to publish the next chapter..... great story!!!!

I very much enjoyed your first two chapters. Here’s hoping that you get your rewrite of chapter 3 done soon.

2redbaron172...Not every person with a last name ending in a vowel is a member of the Mafia or for that matter, not even Italian. And most importantly, most italian people are not mafioso, but are ashamed of the hoodlum Mafia. LP

Coming on nicely

Delightfully complex characters. Nowadays it would be interesting to know if Pyotr is Ukrainian or ethnic Russian. (It's irrelevant but a matter of curiosity given the current sad situation.) Brilliant juxtaposition of a Gargantua with a Lilliputian.