by Michael_Butterfield
I like all of your stories and have had you as a favorite author since The Raft was your only story.
This one has me intrigued and puzzled. Your plot is twisting and braiding itself into something... I do not understand what that something is yet but I will be darned sure to read the next chapters as soon as you publish them.
I can guess what you had to change for the censors but you did well at restructuring without blowing the plot element.
Thank you and keep writing.
More tangles kinks & turns weaves and curves than a pot of cooked spaghetti. good story though. LP
Crafted with amazing sensitivity. The only fitting response is reverence.