All Comments on 'Promises Pt. 03'

by Michael_Butterfield

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GHreaderGHreaderover 2 years ago
I am intrigued.

I like all of your stories and have had you as a favorite author since The Raft was your only story.

This one has me intrigued and puzzled. Your plot is twisting and braiding itself into something... I do not understand what that something is yet but I will be darned sure to read the next chapters as soon as you publish them.

I can guess what you had to change for the censors but you did well at restructuring without blowing the plot element.

Thank you and keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More tangles kinks & turns weaves and curves than a pot of cooked spaghetti. good story though. LP

UncertainTUncertainTover 1 year ago

It's getting deeper….

Great writing.

GaiusPetroniusGaiusPetroniusover 1 year ago

Crafted with amazing sensitivity. The only fitting response is reverence.

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The first fiction I ever wrote (outside of grade school assignments anyway) was a short piece of erotica that I first shared here at Lit. Somehow an Editor’s Choice award was bestowed upon it, but at my request that early and clumsy effort was eventually removed and I focused ...

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