All Comments on 'Proof of Performance'

Loved the idea, and it just came together as I'd hoped. A few loose ends to tidy up in the next part. Don't know if you've written anything elsewhere, but it's so good to find something new. Please continue.

I can see the logic of a physical partnership needing to be "as one".

Excellent writing and unique approach to a problem.

I look forward to reading the solution.

Nice, well written and a different twist. There are so many excellent places you can go with this.

This is truly a unique story and very well told. I have often wondered about the sexual aspects of dancing, figure skating and the like. I think you have told me the answer to my query without my having to pose the question. I am tghlawyer03@gmail.com

Very well written. Nice to read a story that isn't just about sex, but still full of sexual suspense. Looking forward to reading more from you.

More about this trio are coming. And, other stories too. Olivia