All Comments on 'Property of the Master Ch. 01'

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JD2100JD2100over 8 years ago
omg loved it

please continue

MatureWildMatureWildover 8 years ago
Hot!

Can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

please give us more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wildly implausible

Didi it ever occur to you that if the stupid "master" forced his dick into his mouth that he'd simply bite it off rather than submit? Then the master would be rolling around on the floor, bleeding and begging him to call 911. This was just poorly thought out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nothing to see here, folks!

This story's dense

This story's dumb

All the dude's left with

Is a mouth fully CUM

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Ignore the haters, more please!

Note to haters: Are you REALLY criticizing the storytelling or do you just hate the genre? It takes such bravery to post anonymously!!! A lot of unwilling or reluctant blow jobs take place in prison. Some for sure, but not many end in cocks being bitten! It's a fantasy anyway! I happen to like ths genre and this was one of the best stories of this kind I've read for a while. Atmospheric and just plain hot. 5 stars, no question.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Note to author and Fermat.

Hey Fermat, or Doormat or whoever you are!

Posting criticisms is not "hating." It's posting opinions.

Knocking bad writing, a stupid premise or bad storytelling are all opinions.

Learn the difference. And don't knock others for posting anonymously.

Your name surely isn't "Fermat."

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I did kinda like the story also to whoever said you can bite it off I do believe you cannot really bite all that well if your tryin to keep breathing besides its a fucking fantasy

TalyannaTalyannaover 7 years ago
No escape now!

There is no escape, and now he will be a girl FOREVER!

daveflydaveflyalmost 2 years ago

i would love to be in his position right now

MichaelfantasiesMichaelfantasies3 months ago

Stories like this one always scares me a little. Could such a thing really happen to me, being a closeted crossdresser? The Master-sissy relationship is not what I"M looking for, but Hot to read about.

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