by nancywhichler
Could have had more details but I like the pace. Short and focused. Nice job.
I liked it. they both became intoxicated with each other. The mammal in both of them came out. maybe a chapter?
Like reading a D-list bodice ripper...these are not human beings, they are odd automatons acting out a play with all the grace of a 6th grade school production...terrible
I always like a tree planted (wink wink). This is a terrific nub rubber. It was a quick romp , but with a message. I really enjoyed it. We should save our planet, everyone.
-Susie D.
SMUT pure and simple! Barely a story.....and I LOVE it! Write more like this!
Neither was protesting. The story was hot, but I thing erotic couplings would be a better fit.
Utterly stimulating and exhilarating description of male dominance. Lucky fucking muscle brute!