All Comments on 'Protecting Emily Ch. 01'

Very good start to this story, five stars, I can’t wait for the rest of it

I absolutely loved this story. I read it twice and gave it 5 stars.

Very nice story.......BUT you need to determine if the guy is a Marine or army. Very insulting to one or the other! Can't wait to find out what happens!

Thank you so much for your feedback everyone - it's heartwarming :). We'll definitely be sure to clarify this going forward - will have to look into it to get the specifics right.

It's a really fun write, and i personally looooooove doing dialogue practice such as this ;).

Have a great sunday!

--Jasmine

Good description of her emotions but he would/should know better than to fuck or believe anything a 19 y/o street hooker says. I mean he's dick #1000, maybe #15 today? Ugh.

I like it. I agree with Anonymous about Army vs Marine and Marines don't have medics they have Navy Corpsmen.

Oh yes, great start, PLEASE DON'T STOP.

I’m really looking forward to the next chapter

Need more! Need much more. Chapter 2 SOON, Please. And thank you for the story thus far.

We're not stopping - just real life stuff and work at the moment ;)

Look forward to part two!

Please decide if he is a MARINE or ARMY. That's my only suggestion. Other than that please continue.

Thanks for the comment ;).

Really enjoyed this chapter, Emily jumps off the page and I loved transformation of the quiet game shop keeper. I know where I'm playing my next game of Friday night Magic!

I hope you continue it and I'm excited to try another of your stories!

Maybe her pill won't work. Maybe Ben will straighten her life out... Maybe, she'll be a mommy and wife!