All Comments on 'Proving Her Virginity'

I LOVE THIS STORY! Hope you could write something like this again!

Reading this story was an eye opener as i didn't expect the violence in it, but that made it more exciting. please write more...can't wait to read em. really hot story.

THAT WAS WELL WOW IS ALL I CAN SAY PLZ WRITE MORE THEN WAS FUCKING GREAT

The act of "hate" seemed to be the theme. Not necessary.

Good read.

wudda rather it not bin voilent, can b seen as rape man

Of all the stories I've read on Literotica, this is by far the most grotesque, disturbing, and just plain wrong one of them all. In my opinion, you should be kicked off the site and imprisoned.

thats just wrong

You're writing is hot, even though I did not get into what he did to her. I think you have a talent for writing, keep on going.

(Obviously) disregard the people that managed to read through your story and then post negative comments. They obviously liked it enough to not turn away in disgust.. and it IS in the incest/Taboo category - if they prefer to read about one taboo over another - that's great.. but...

-R

My pussy is all wet, thank you! Time to play on my own!

its hard 2 find stories like these, i really like it rough, so that was a major turn on, keep up the good work

its just wrong on so many levels, it wasn't sexy, it was a rape story

now in part although the sister is nervous it is written as a combination between a powerful domination story and a incest story so as a dommination story it is not particularily hard and the calling his sister a slut is just part of the mental dommination that i guess the character would have been doing since childhood the viokence is just an extension of his dominant side admitedly it should not have gone to the stage it did with the violence but i personally am dominant and have trained slaves fucksluts what ever u want to call them and always you break them to your will this story is the brother doing thast to his sister in an inexperianced way breaking his sister to his will and making her his toy his pet his slave. and if you l9ook at nightmare princesses other storys she is into exploring her submissive side through her work thus this could just be one of her fasntasies yes her i would understand the outcry if it was a man writing like this but women know the sort of thing they like as a individual

Brutal rape is not erotic.

You need help if you think this is good writing.

She did not deserve to be treated so harshly.

She would have been just as good a fuck if it had been with a loving touch....I'm not into forceful sex.

should have been in the nonconsent genre but it was well written and she did enjoy herself in the end...good job, keep writing.

This was very hot and in my favorite genre,incest. I read with interest both the negative and positive comments. This is the first story I have read by you and it had many subtle nuances. Rape would have been if he ripped her clothes off and fucked her. She undressed herself for him, with intention,and put his hand to her sex. She was controlling her own domination by him. Bravo Princess. You nailed it (like he nailed her).

By the way, do rape victims cum 4 times?

This was a hot story. It was brutal and erotic. It would be nice to see it continue.

ddddddamn!!!!! this article was good its got my pussy all wet even though it was a little cruel.

You have some real talent, which is rare to find on this site. However, it needs to be clearer what you want from this piece. If it's brother-sister dominance (which I think it is) go for it, but make that clearer from the off set. I don't think you meant this to be a rape story, it just doesn't read like one. Think deeper and help bring out what is already buried in your characters and it will take your writing to a higher level, where it belongs. Keep up the good work.

if you like this story you need some real help rape is not erotic it is not sexy it is just disguting and i think you should be taken out in the middle of nowhere and shot

Take it any way you can get it!

This story is not erotic, so it doesn't belong here on this site. It is simply crude and nasty, and would only appeal to twisted minds like yours.

This should be in the rape category.. not just in a random one. I hate crap like this; I knew this website was going down hill when it allowed anybody to write. I didn't have to get more than a paragraph into it to know it's shit.

Look at her name. Nightmare Princess, not fucking Roses-and-sweetness Princess. Yes, it should be in Nonconsent, or at least have a warning at the beginning, but it IS incest, so stop bitching.

This could barely be called rape. Go look in Nonconsent and flame on a REAL rape story. This is reluctance, and she ended up enjoying herself. It's rough, yes - that's how some people like it. If it's not your taste, move on.

You say rough is sick - think how many people would think you're fucked up for reading incest. Stop being stupid.

It is rape, pure and simple. Thre is nothing erotic about it, and it certainly is not aimed at people who will only tolerate consensual sex.Banish crap like this!

It was all rape and doesn't belong on this site at all, get rid of it

Violence is a big softy...

NightmarePrincess, ignore these 'Oh no! It's rape!' comments. Half the written content on this site is about rough dominance, not candy-sweet love making! Ugh. Some people. I don't even know why they're on this site. I honestly liked this story and I think you made everything pretty damn clear. While I was reading, I realised that I was fingering myself and was soaking wet. The -idea- of rape, is indeed very erotic and sexy, especially when it's incest.

All I can say, is that I'm proud to be as so-called 'twisted' as you, NP!

Well sis this is a sicko story just plain mean . yuck!!!

fucking is about love,wether it is incest or not rape is violence and abuse put this in the bin or the dom site

This was ok!!! i liked it

Princess, I liked your story! The sister obviously enjoyed being screwed by her brother by the string of orgasms. Freedom of speech is freedom of expression. I like your story. I find that if I am reading a story on here and I do not like the way it is heading or I do not like the contents of the story, There is a green button on the top left hand of my computer that says "back". I click on it and move on to something else. One person's fantasy may not be my cup of tea, but it does not make it awful, horrible, or needing removal from the site. I, personally, love dominance and do not have a problem with the whole incest thing. I do not have a brother, so I have nothing to experience. All in all, honey, I liked it. I liked the raw sexual brutality. Perhaps you could have the brother light some rose scented candles next time.

Um guys its called incest for a reason, I am sure NightmarePrincess didnt put it in any RANDOM category. I enjoyed it and personally I get ridiculously turned on by the rape type stories. Just cause you dont like it doesnt make it trash or that it should be taken off. Get over yourselves.

My dick was throbbing as i was reading this story, i had to stop every now and then before i came on my keyboard.....

First off this is a very well written story, good flow and content and a great ending. However to all of those who have slammed this story because he "rapes" her get over yourselves. Literotica was setup to cater to all tastes.

Oh and fucking isn't just about love its about fulfilling

our base needs, as this story shows quite well.

I understand where some of these "Oh god , He raped her" people are coming from . But A. This is a STORY ... Not REALITY B. Its FREEDOM OF SPEECH (This is artwork and imagination Put where you fucking want it .) C. No one can tell me that they don't get turned on by the thought of dominating someone that way .(And if you DO say you don't Your lying to yourself , Control is what ALL humans fight for .)

Good Work , Keep it up .

Nice work. iv seen better, butthis one deffinately one of my favorites so far.i really wanted the sex to go on longer, and the story coulda ended somewhat differently than him just walking away =

you are one sick woman as a woman you should be ashamed of yourself for writting your story "PROVING HER VIRGINITY" you are suposed to be trying to prevent rape not encourageing it if you had to write this piece of crap you should have had the decency to put it in the proper section it belongs in the nonconsensual section if not the trash you are such a loser

These are the kind of stories that really disturb me. And it is totally unrealistic to think that every time someone is raped that because you are so good that they will suddenly love being raped and forgive you. The real word doesn't work like that, only the imaginary world of unreal illusion.

well i honestly i havent red the story yet but any way i dont see sex between bro & sis is sick or father & daughter, what i see is sick may be between mother & son, i dont want my dad to fuck me , i want my brother, and i dont like raping thats all fooks , sexy virgin

Not a bad story. I see where the people who say it's disturbing and wrong are coming from. But, the fact is that it's a story. I like it. And believe me, I don't have a thing for anyone in my family, nor will I ever or ever want to. I don't think it's right for people to actually be incestuous, but stories are harmless. And I'd never want to be raped. No woman ever would. Yet tons of women have rape fantasies, as do I. Fantasies are just that. Fantasies. Good story anyway. :)

First off, it was rather good, could have improved some sections although.

Kind of short but perfect for rainy day readers.

The people who say it sucked and say your odd, or that you shouldnt premote rape are silly. Expecially the ones who think incest is disturbing. They have to have liked it or wouldnt read it. Or even came to the section clearly labeled incest/taboo.

Inside they know it excites them lol.

They say girls wouldnt do that or it wasnt realistic but obviously they dont know girls today, many would and want the exciting pleasure of "rape" even if it was just a roleplay.

to those of you who had something harsh or disapproving to say about the story, I'm wondering why you decided to post it in such an embarrassing way. First of all, she wrote a story. Key words being "wrote" and "story". She did not advocate anything because it was just a STORY; something in her own head. This is a public domain and people may write what they choose to write. Why not critique her writing style, not just her style in general? Maybe that would be a bit more helpful. I personally enjoyed the story. There were a few typos but other than that, I thought it was very well written.

Yes, this is free speech in operation, but so are the comments that decry it as rape. Sure this is a 'story', but the author posted it here knowing full well it would be reviewed, so I'm giving it a review. Rape isn't sex, I found myself turned off by his brutality. Even if the blatant rape were taken out of it, the story was a cold and unfeeling screw story, and didn't do much for me. The brother and sister relationship didn't enter into it, really, you could substitute 'boyfriend' for brother in most cases and itwould be the same tale. Writing style is mediocre, why EXPLODED instead of just 'exploded', etc. Please try harder.

terrible why would she take of her bra to prove she was a virgin??

shed just either say im a virgin fuck off nob or pull her panties down let him touvh her and walk off

If you don't like the dang story then don't read it. This is incestual stories...think before you read!!!!! Your story is great NightmarePrincess...very original. From beginning to end was great. Can't wait to hear what he does to her next time.

GREAT STORY KEEP IT UP

This was a really good story.. and I'd like to remind your other commenters that it's a STORY. A story won't make someone go out and rape somebody. Just like no one ever grabbed a gun and started murdering people because of Grand Theft Auto.

Anyway, very nicely written. Got me all hot and bothered. Keep up the good work!

What an intense fucking story, well thought out, well written, I will say I noticed that she wouldn't have had to take her bra off to prove anything but maybe, just maybe she was gonna change clothes and prove it at the same time, and that bra wouldn't go with the outfit. She was an 18 yr old virgin, how down to earth could you expect the girl to be. Any bad criticism out there, the pricks should consider what topic of discussion they click before they freak out over taboo/incest.. Morons. Intense story. Awesome job.

Loved this story, such a turn on! 2 of my favorite roleplays, incest and rape. We can all (or most atleast) admit to fantacising about being submissive, and im sure most males will admit to fantacising about being dominant.

To all those out there who think this is wrong, take a good hard look at yourselves, and stop hiding.

very bad story writers like you give incest an even wrose image than it already has keep it loving or put it in the rape area stupid

Not a good one i think he was to hard on her. he could have be nice after she proved she was a virgin

Seriously? Oh, I am fully aware that it is just a story, and getting a little rough can be a great turn on if it is done right, but slapping her in the face? Wtf?

only creeps get turned on by rape....disgusting

wow, this story was amazing! The way you described all of the little details, I could really feel it, really visualize it. It was so good, I amost had an orgasm myself just reading it, seriously! great story!

i still fuck my sister she 45 i`m 46 she needs a big cock now and then plus husband never ass fucked her she liked it my 9 inches wants in her now i`m hard as hell my little slut

just another rape story in the wrong area any reader that thinks this was a good story or a love story needs to get their head examined this was rape pure and simple and should have been put in the nonconsent area but the idiot webmasters have failed again as usual

Desrespectful towards women, brutal and plain stupid! What has the girl done to deserve such treatment? In the novel it is the brother with all the negative thoughts about women, he´s just transferring his sick thoughts on the woman character! Bad, I don´t want to see anything more from him/her!

THEN MAKE MY SAMMICH

love this story :) please write another chapter!

there are readers here that have been raped or forced into sex and do not want to be reminded of the hell they went through that is why they have a"NONCONSENT/RELUCTANCE" area so readers that don't like this type of sick story don't have to be bothered trying to pick the nonviolent stories you can and should be sued for knowingly causing undue trauma SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND USE THE PROPER CATAGORY

this story was so hot, had to play with myself as i read it. Mmmm. Write a second chapter, pls.

that was nice i agree write a sequel

That was plain out rape

Nice

This is shit

Should be in non-consensual

Brother is a fucking scumbag.

Author sucks