by JamesMiehoff
You have my interest in this tale, please continue the entertainment.
5/5
All the gizmo stuff is a bit confusing and totally unexplained if this is meant to be the future, present in alt universe, or here today but juiced up to think we can be superboy hackers. Information that you wrote but never posted the previous part does not help get readers.
You write really well and good enough with telling a story. But please let us in on the secret of what you are talking about.
Look forward to part 2, hopefully to provide some relevant information about who, where and when.
Holy shit this is a good story. Please continue and i dont know why you didnt win