All Comments on 'PSI Plague: Recruitment'

by JamesMiehoff

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TheKrrakTheKrrakover 4 years ago
Intriguing

You have my interest in this tale, please continue the entertainment.

5/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
also intruiged

Yes, seconded.

I'd like to see where you're going with this.

TarnishedPennyTarnishedPennyover 4 years ago
Most intriguing

I look forward to more.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 4 years ago
Bit of almost everything

All the gizmo stuff is a bit confusing and totally unexplained if this is meant to be the future, present in alt universe, or here today but juiced up to think we can be superboy hackers. Information that you wrote but never posted the previous part does not help get readers.

You write really well and good enough with telling a story. But please let us in on the secret of what you are talking about.

Look forward to part 2, hopefully to provide some relevant information about who, where and when.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Pls make more

Holy shit this is a good story. Please continue and i dont know why you didnt win

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 4 years ago

I'm not usually a cyberpunk fan, but this is pretty good.

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