All Comments on 'Psycho?'

Brilliant!

Smooch for not sexualizing the rape. I hate that so very much.

Everyone need an avenging angel. Even if the "angel" is more Lucifer than Michael. Great story.

"... then I had this idea and the story flowed ...". The mystery of the Muse.

Nice sketch/outline....frankly there isn't enough here to call it a story... would be nice to see you flesh it out to a real tale...

3 stars

Nice Job

*****Fine bit of storytelling with a great storyline of justified action. Thanks for sharing.

A great story. I would like to see more from this character.

Fucking amazing

Hopefully, Martha turns out to be okay!

5

Sometimes justice catches up with the bad guys and it can be a bitch! Nicely done!

Love this and it seems like it could be a snippet of a bigger story that I would love to read.

Yes!!!!! Only complaint was vibrator should have been a real dick. 5*

5 stars!

Phenomenal. A true love story. TC Ireland

Oh, it just got started, then came to the end suddenly??? More to come, I hope. Worth a five for potential...

5* story all the way ... true love is often born from common compassion - but it's nice to have some skills to punish the wicked.

Thanks for sharing...

Bravo! 5*

Really liked the story line, justice served to the bad guys. I think Mike got of easy, he just got a sore ass hole and some rat bites on his privates, but Keth paid the price. Well done and would like to read more of this guy.

Very tight and very dark. Not my cup of tea, but very engaging nonetheless…like watching a train wreck.

Outstanding! 5* from me.

Loved it

Really different and interesting story on several levels. I would have to disagree with the character you presented as having BPD. I have personal experience in that area and BPD doesn't really manifest itself in the way your character acted. I'd love to see a follow-up to the story if you have any energy left. 5*

Unique from other entries of Randi's event. I read more than a couple of entries and mist of them has a wimpy husband as MC. Glad this one is different but I don't condone psychopaths Norman Bates characters.

A sequel could be interesting, but not necessary. Thanks for the effort.

That's a very dark story, but very well written. Do people like the protagonist exist with that set of skills and that psychopathy exist, working for a shadowy government agency? Yes, they do. I actually know one.

A real man good read

The punishment was good but he should have also used acid on their faces. Make sure they don’t have good looks to ensure girls in the future!

Well done, sir. Dark, as you said, but compelling. Write another, please. Hail Amber! Randi.

MORE

Outstanding. Go on, please. Finally someone not waiting for Karma to catch up with those vile creatures ....

Simply brilliant thank you.

Outstanding work.

One never knows just who might love someone…or how much they might love them. The guys in this dark tale learned that lesson the hard one. Great job and thanks for participating in the challenge.

The Army does not train at Quantico.

The CIA does not train in Quantico either.

What was there was very good. But it was definitely incomplete. A half story

A seriously good noir tale. Very clever in structure and the telling. Thank you.

Awful.

I thought it was an excellent story (5 Stars) although a little light on pain to the rapists. The rapists should have at minimum lost their balls besides all the broken bones.

Quite a good yarn. A couple of minor items, farm training isn’t at quantico, nor is it where you’d expect. Recycle is what it’s called when you screw up in basic training, but the army still considers you useful and will send you back.

Nice use of the rat :). Psychological torture is very effective in specific short use cases.

More please...I like this pyscho. There is a great story in the wings, please tell it... What happens to Martha? Do they begin a relationship? Will he only ever be her guardian/avenging angel/demon? Does the father of the busted up boy strike back?

Creative

Is he kin to Jack Reacher?

You're the psycho. Why do you leave every story unfinished??? FTDS!!!

I'm with the earlier comment, at the very least he should have castrated the bastards. Preferably, make them full invalids so they are unable to do ANYTHING (no fingers, tongues, eyelids, genitals, maybe no limbs even) for the rest of life, but still are a drain on their rich family to keep them alive and see suffer.

And agree with another earlier comment, this character definitely deserves more stories. This world needs a LOT more people like him.

FTDS

Loved it. Someone said he should have castrated them. Well he did beat the shit out their balls. I imagine that’s going to do much of the same thing. I’m not sure what was unfinished as it seemed to have an ending to me but some people are never satisfied.

Sounds like a relative of the Equalizer. Good work.

Excellent. Thanks.

Interesting. A la Equalizer or Jack Reacher but with BPD.