All Comments on 'Public Love'

by the_shires

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hi!

i enjoyed your story very much, i think you are quite talented.

i think this story has a week point: there is no explanation, how this shy wallpaper girl all of a sudden became a cocksucking expert being able to deep-throat that huge black cock...

to my opinion, a story must be plausible, as a rising question will distract the reader from the story line and disturb the magic.

i 'm looking forward to your next story --- upsteve

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
for a new writer

this category is a problem. it's love or it's not. it's a rather a hangout for racists.

cheryl_4funcheryl_4funalmost 11 years ago
great

iloved the story makes me want to go the that reception and deep throat some black cock I am glad I started out sucking cock as a young girl before having sex I learned how good it is and how to please my man certainly luv the taste of cum , yummme so natural didnto take me but one date to a black bull down my throat and make him moan and fill me with his cum just like marie

I want more of her , maybe I can do some of the same things she enjoys

bettyluvsitbettyluvsitalmost 11 years ago
hot

wow I have never had nerve to do that with a black man in public infact never been seen in public with a black except in another town far enough that

be really slim if I saw any one that I knew but it would be so hot to do what she did I have found how hot black cock really is how did she know ?

I want more of this black gem

lin4_69lin4_69almost 11 years ago
oh yes

my kind of woman . I luv to get a black Adonis and fuck his eyes out

and I mean out they so sexy I can not get enough so glad husband left for a young one and I got the check book and the chance to go black when ever I can get free from the kids

the_shiresthe_shiresalmost 11 years agoAuthor

upsteve - very good point, thank you

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