All Comments on 'Pumpkin Patch Change in Plans'

by theWriterInTheNude

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Wildbill314Wildbill314over 1 year ago

I wish people would stop chopping onions while I’m reading…

des911des911over 1 year ago

Lovely story - romantic, of course, but with enough uncertainty to keep it from becoming too sweet. I really enjoyed it. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awesome Story. Loved it. 5 stars

Car6555Car6555over 1 year ago

So good that I look forward to a second and third read. Thank you for sharing this story

PhotoMeisterPhotoMeisterover 1 year ago

I really enjoyed this romance. I did think it had too much sex for this category.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

That was a lovely romamce story. It was better than a lot of published catagory romances. Well done.

Smiffy69Smiffy69over 1 year ago

Love a happy ending with no heartache along the way. 5*

Seeker81Seeker81over 1 year ago

Outstanding! Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

An excellent read. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Was so afraid there was going to be trouble. Thanks for keeping it great.

hornier_bastardhornier_bastardover 1 year ago

it was a great story, not only in spite of, but partially because of the gay relationship. I have no idea why Anon below is so uncomfortable with it... it's part of life and our society, and there was no gay sex described, so that person needs to get a life!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Quaff means drink. I think you meant "well coiffed".

mac1729mac1729over 1 year ago

A really good story

Thanks for writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I’d give six stars if I could to counteract that anti gay comment from a few days ago.

Ravey19Ravey19over 1 year ago

Lovely story all round.

01Timber6701Timber67over 1 year ago

Beautifully written and a amazing story. I enjoyed the both side of their story in this. 5⭐️

muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Great story, 5/5. Just a bit long winded though....

wwaldripwwaldripover 1 year ago

Great story I loved reading it, seemed like I was inspired throughout the whole story of their life journey with them. I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Umm... Sorry had to quit on page 4. Andie is just to much of a whore for me to enjoy the story

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Cynthia is a selfish sexcrazy bitch if a friend!!

Davis is sn annoying asshole!!

Story could have been shortened, it just dragged along

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

The town bicycle should just fuck the faggot Davis already since she enjoys being naked around him!! The drama in the maze after the dance, planned by the interfering bitches Davis and Cynthia, was so pathetic!!

OU8ME2ICOU8ME2IC9 months ago

What a wonderful love story. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for the time and effort you put into writing it.

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I work as a computer programmer in my everyday life. Writing has always been a creative outlet that I don't always get. Erotic fiction is an exciting new thing. Writing in the nude is not new.