by PDeanMurphy
I'm sorry to say it was way too harsh for me to enjoy.
Would've liked there to be at least some eroticism between then, but it was all about the pain.
Just did nothing for me.
I can understand where you are coming from with the too harsh comment. You also must realize that I had the character in this story request that and that was what was given to her. I am not saying that there will not be eroticism between them later on. You will have to wait and find out if you choose to read farther. I do appreciate your comments and will strive to make everyone happy but that is virtually impossible. Thanks, Dean
the best punishment would have been for him to fuck her and knock her up then do the same to her daughter with them watching it being done to each other
She wanted every minute of the punishment, but he should not have left her alone. Never leave someone alone if they're tied up.