All Comments on 'Punished for Lying Ch. 06'

Good one. Give next part soon. Real soon

Sorry but have you forgotten all you wrote in the first 5 chapters?

This just don't follow in line from those, to bad as you had a qoog serie going until now

Of course i read it. I wrote it and maybe you should go back to the end of chapter 5. The last two paragraphs I believe hinted at what was coming by a threat from Shea. I led right into this and 6 leads into 7 just as well in the last few paragraphs.

Make sure there is hell to pay and give them complete humiliation and have fun writing it . Thank you

It makes sense the girls would want revenge, but Cindy, Jackie and Ginny all requested the treatment Dean gave them and seemed to enjoy it.

Having them take part, and having it be something Dean enjoys is a weird and breaks the story, in my view.

IT's a pity, as this was a really good series, but I'd revise this chapter a bit and perhaps change it around to something Dean doesn't enjoy and cut out the original three.

I had planned the role reversal as far back as chapter three. I wanted to break the storyline some because some readers were actually expecting it from the e-mails that I have received. I am working on Chapter 7 and depending on how long the edit takes I hope it is out soon. I am sure you will be happy with it and the direction it leads. Dean

Please continue.

Lots of fun

First of all I really like your stories. Can you please publish the next part and maybe work on a successor to for example "Dean and Marie".

You have had a very long time to write part 7 so please publish it.

Keep up the good work!

How long until the next installment? I want to read about the hayride.

Wow all stories that I've read has made me soaking wet can't wait to see the next one😀 Did a very good job thank u