All Comments on 'Punished in the Courtyard'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
as bad as it gets

I din't like black men fucking white women.

nadinephillipsnadinephillipsover 8 years ago
Intruging

Sounds like there is much more to come.............including both of you as well. Enjoy becoming a total slut for pain and/or pleasure.

Nadine

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well, I like that the author really likes to get the readers involved with the blunt writing of the adventures of the women. The beginning of the author's stories captures the pain of the women as they are beaten and raped. Unfortunately, the stories all end too abruptly. Apparently, that is the style of the author and it leaves the readers wanting to know more about the capture and subsequent adventures of the women. As standalone stories, they are really well done however they are unfinished.

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An expat living in Finland. I write about things that I would never actually want to do to anyone. I enjoy them as fantasies, but nothing more. Hopefully they are read in the same way. My work does centre around non-consensual sex - especially the earlier stories - so if that...