by shaunreagh
Perhaps a bit harsh...but the description is excellent, and very sexy.
Not the usual erotic fare. You made something so familiar a bit unusual and different. A refreshing read about most everyone's favorite subject.
Very erotic, very well written. Congratulations on a job done well.
in the first paragraph he's a buyer for Wal-Mart, in the last , for K-Mart? did he change jobs mid story? good story though
It was pretty unique in the storyline- nice to see a change from the usual. Keep writing, it was a great read.
This story smacks of experience of oriental women that many people have not had. I personally love sex with them. Very well written.. Thanks
It's Wal-Mart in the third paragraph, but K-Mart in the last, if I understand correctly.
Nevertheless it's entertaining. Thanks.
Miss Cheng is a keeper. Period.
I feel sorry for Miss Cheng: due to a mix up she met the buyer from another company. She is likely to lose her job.
***** (5)!
Miss Cheng is a keeper.
She is a dedicated worker who is ready 'to go over and above' to make a client happy.
This is a five star story: 5.0 = 100%.
Miss Cheng is good in bed.
At the end of this story there is a twist.
Five stars: πππππ.
The male protagonist (the narrator) is a man without scruples. Having said that I must admit the story is very very erotic.