All Comments on 'Pure Love in the Halcyon World'

by aluscious

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fishingrod48 about 5 years ago

Beautiful

This is so well written

TSreader about 5 years ago

A wonderful story!

And very yummy! Thank you!

aluscious about 5 years agoAuthor

Thank you tsreader and fishingrod for the kind words. Next time i will be more careful to weed out typing errors. In many places girls appear in place of girl.

Aluscious

Anonymousover 1 year ago

I love this story, both the plot and the characters! The parts I prefer are the scenes between Fiona and Lobzang, and between Fiona and Tenzing. I hope you can write another story with the same characters! Fiona may "come again next year to be a part of this sweet love circle"...

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