by JustATaste
OK! He's punished her indiscretion, made her his slut for as long as he wants, what happens next? We don't even known why she did it, right? If Ethan is a scumbag, it's revenge time. What was Alex's sister thinking? You have got to finish this, blood and guts would be good. Maybe a gangbang with Ethan's wife, turning her to Alex, might cool your commenters. You write well, so keep it going. Destroy Ethan's family life by taking his wife, you know, get nasty. Keep writing.
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