by phoenixcinders
Very very good can't wait for moreππππππππππππ
Good read and well written. I'm glad you took the time to proof read and correct spelling errors.
However, interesting start to a story arc. Will the alien, go to school and hi-jinx ensue? Or will the bullies have a lesson taught - at length (bad pun)?
Looking forward to the next one.
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Honestly I kinda wish you would finish your other stories. But it's not my job to tell you what to write so do go ahead and I'll keep reading whatever you put out.
Nice work.
I don't see why he is insisting to go to school as he has no further need for it now hes her pet.
It would be nice to see her slaughter those at school and kidnap him off into space.
I wonder if this will receive further chapters. If so, the steamy scenes could be a tad longer.
Apart from that, I will be looking forward to more.
A βflying, purple, people-eaterβ? I see what you did there, nice touch! What a great story so far. Iβm hoping that you continue this, and do so soon! There are so many hot possibilities, especially with her transformative powers. It would really be hot to bring his real mom into this, given his reaction to the alien taking her form!