by KemMyst
I really liked Animal lover, but this story is leaving me a bit frustrated as it seems that you've submitted your outline, not the completed chapters.
The flow of words is stilted and choppy. It is like something you would find in a dick and jane book. Very hard to read.
I don't think lyssa should get pregnant yet. It's soon. I can't imagine where the story line would go if that were the case, but i'm not a writer. I think right now, her abilities should take precedent.
This steady pace of chapters is wonderful. The whole storyline of Lyssa being in estrus was entertaining. I love the fact that even though she was going crazy, she still managed to use the tools. Since you have set this pace of posting so often, I will expect nothing less. hehe-he. Thank for another great chapter.
i hope that she would get pregnant now... it would be so sad if she couldn't have pups with the man that she loves
was a good chapter i hope she gets pregnant this time looking forward to your next chapter
just a little bit of advice might want to make some kind of mark when u are in a different place