All Comments on 'Push Me Ch. 01'

that was a hot story. I really hope you don't wait too long to post the follow up.

I do hope the rest is slightly better edited. Lose/loose was the main one that distracted me, especially as it happened twice close together. There were a couple other very minor things, too, but they didn't take me out of the story.

Very nicely written. Please continue the story.

Really good start and I can't wait to read more. Hopefully it comes (no pum intended) soon.

Thank you! More Soon!

started out slow but heated up quickly...real spicy HOT! Looking forward to reading the rest of your stories.

There are some mistakes like loose/lose and typos, but still a great story. I like your main character and you have a great set-up. I hope there's more with these characters. So far it seems like he's more interested in Moira, but there could be an unusual relationship between the three of them. You're a fantastic story teller. Looking forward to more!

Thanks for sharing!

I really like where you are going with this.

You must have asbestos keys on your keyboard. This thing is so far beyond hot. Chapter 2, here I come!