All Comments on 'Push Me Ch. 02'

You have a wonderful knack for describing the emotions being felt, and I love the slow buildups to the dramatic scenes. Keep it coming - looking forward to the next chapter * * * * *

This is a wonderful story. I look forward to reading more of it.

I can't wait for next chapter. I like how Craig treat the ladies, though I'm totally team Moira, lol, just as Craig if I'm not mistaken.

As the characters develop here, the level of tenderness grows to co-exist on an equal footing with the hawtness. Well done. Observation and suggestion: Your editing is good. Having it proofread for grammar and spelling would add quality. That said, I'm loving the story.