All Comments on 'Pushing Boundaries'

By page 3 I had to share this with a friend. I normally don't share porn. But your story just reminded me so much of our group. Well done

LOVED the consent, communication, bodily variety, joy, cosiness, friendship, delay in satisfaction, mutual admiration, etc. Finally, a carefree fap - no mental gymnastics to justify terrible age gaps or behaviours (yeah yes, hygiene aside, but that'd have taken all the wind out of this story AND you actually mentioned this!).

You made it so easy to step into their realm, great descriptions. I'd love to read more of your work

What a brillant fantasy (I can’t imagine many student houses having quite this sort of fuck-fest) but superbly written, both the overall variety and in terms of the quality of language used. Well done!

i would have liked for him to trust her with Josh. maybe not sex since it was new to her but at least, let her give him a blowjob or get eaten out by him. the rest...great but that insecurity was a bit odd

I can't wait to read more about them, awesome story! Really enjoying your other work too, thank you :)

It was interesting the anticipation when the game was going, the build-up and the writing wasn't so predictable. Alanna and Austin relationship could be explored maybe from the beginning(just an idea// for novela series) if you're upto it and it could be turn into something more beautiful, far more erotic story with ups and down they might face in their relationship(the 3 way, maybe Alanna falling for someone else, the pain, falling out of their relationship and more). Btw great story. Keep up the good work

I definitely enjoyed this story, and all of the girl-girl action was really hot and exciting, but why are the guys left out? Why not let Austin feel a hard cock for the first time either in his mouth or his ass. Maybe Alana could fuck him with her strap-on. I've never understood why girl-girl contact in an otherwise hetero setting is common p!ace, but boy-boy sex is ignored. Boys and men should open their sexual boundaries as well as girls and women.

A clever and inventive piece of fictional writing, as most others commenters have said. Possibly a bit on the long side. Are US college students really so gratuitously promiscuous, though? Perhaps they are.....

Austin takes Alanna into the City for a special event. They leave, sit on a park bench and he's so horny a cop sees his hard on and tells them to move on. They go home to Austin's room. Alanna blindfolds him. Then the story ends.

I wanted her to tie him to the bed and maybe straddle his face and rub him all the while his cock aching to be touched. And finally at llong last Alanna would turn around. Put desensitzer in his condom to make him last. And make him work and work to reach his orgasm. She had hers and she loved to play with his arousal and resoponse. He tries to drive himself but tied down he can't do much. Finally, she tightens down on him and just as he is totally exhausted he comes. Thats what I was hoping for.

This was your first story, and despite my love of the AMA series, it's still my favorite work of yours. I look forward to the return of Alanna, Austin, and Melena in long form.

Great story. A bit on the long side. I love a good orgy scene. What I liked most is that Austin and Alanna as new as their relationship is are able to share without recrimination or jealousy. That is probably due to their life long friendship, but it means that they will be able to have so much sexy fun going forward without doubt.

I might have commented on this story before, perhaps anonymously..

I love that this story is unashamedly both loving and erotic.

I would also turn the volume up to eleven.

Great story, really well done.

Great Story!! I love the writing because it felt like the true feelings of college life and those views of possible realities. For me and my middle age POV I thought Malena would be Austin’s true match as a friend, lover and partner. He has certainly programmed himself to obsess and pursue Alanna and loyalty to himself (and how hot and open she us) would require hime to ride that out, but she has needs to explore more than any of the others - and she knows that. In my mind this explains her wanting to keep Austin’s true match (Malena) in the mix. Your descriptions of Malena were so incredible and I think this story could have easily derailed into a true romance on the picnic table in the rain behind the house. Malena was ready to play for keeps. That’s how good this writing is. Love it thank you

OMG!! The best ever game of strip poker along with a secret relationship and a fantasy that became reality.

loved it

One of my favorite stories on here. Came back to leave it a comment. I hope to see more from these characters!

This may well be the hottest story I have ever read. Hit most if not all of my fantasies. Would like to give it a 10.

This was amazing. Please give us more with these characters and keep writing as you are an awesome writer. Off to read more of your stories.

This is the first..no second of your stories I have read…… I will be reading them ALL! Thank you sooooooo much!!

One of the hottest stories on this site... So glad I found you as all the stories I've read so far a amazing

Probably the sexiest, horniest story I’ve read on Lit…… I had to read it in stages…if you know what I mean…

Group sex stories normally don’t appeal to me… but the trust, compassion, and complete consideration each showed towards the others made this story prefect IMO. The romance between Austin & Alanna was icing on the cake. So heartfelt and genuine. 5 stars all the way!!!

I think Meliana was an unnecessary addition to the story.

The rules for cheating were also unneeded.

What’s wrong with monogamy? I would have liked the story more were those two things had been left out.

I’m amazed at how promiscuous the portrayed students are.it’s like watching porn—al the men have monster cocks & the women all have DD cups.

Not a realistic portrait of the general population.

Of course I went to a conservative college & it was 50 some years ago, but still. I’d bet the college kids there today aren’t nearly as promiscuous ass portrayed here.

I think it would be harder to write erotica it’s conservative students, but if you could pull it off you’d have a masterpiece.

Liked this anyway.

Bill. S.

Excellent!!!

Bill S.

It’s a known fact that when.Americans are shot they invariably drop to the ground.

It’s not a usual reaction to most gunshot wound, but we have seen so many westerns & cops & robbers shows in which the shot guy always falls down when shot that we automatically do it too.

In this story the men always claims that a condom really decreases the feelings.

Now I’ll admit that when I did my experiment the lady whom I was screwing wasnr very tight (I could easily fist her.) but when my condom slipped off I took a dozen pumps before I pulled it back on.

I could feel no difference.

Same for going soft after an organism. I was a 22 year old sailor who was a virgin. Too embarrassed to admit it I just opened a few extra condoms & placed them on the table next to the bed.

I knew the first time would last less than a minute so after a few strokes I told her it was too sloppy & put on a new condom. I did this three times without stopping.

Later she told me the second time was a little too long. I bit my tong & didn’t say a word about it being not my second but my forth organism.

I was surprised that she thought it was two times because I didn’t think I’d stopped long enough for her to realize it as t just one time.

Ow 50+years later I can’t do that anymore but I still think it’s just a mental expectation for younger men rather than a physical one.

Bill S.

That was a very well written story, and very entertaining. I loved it, great work. Thank you, and keep writing.

I started to write that while it was sexy, it was totally unbelievable. No group of college students is going to act like this without first being involved sexually— it just wouldn’t happen.

Then I went back and looked more closely. YES! They were all Canadians! We all know what they are like! So yeah, five * * * * *, easily!

By far the best "orgy" scene I have ever read. Amazing writing with really wonderful characters!

Amazing story and great writing and editing. Not really much to criticize that wouldn't say more about me than your story or ability (like a number of comments).thank you and I'm heading to your profile for more.

Good story a intersting dare woyld have been to have one if the girls nail one of the guys with a strap on as. Ge was. Fucking. One. Of them

Jbluejayzz just because a writer doesnt want to have their characters engage in male homosexual acts doesn't make them homophobic. That's just their sexual preference. To say that they have to just because there was female homosexual and bisexual acts being explored and engaged in is a little sexist against heterosexual cis gendered males.

Did Alanna ever get to come?

One of the hottest stories ever

Great erotica, but you shouldn't be so homophobic. If girls can look and touch and talk about each other's bodies, there's nothing wrong with guys looking and talking about each other's dicks and bodies. If the girls had to (got to) kiss and taste the other girls, Austin should have tried sucking cock for the first time. Still, great sex.

I said everything I had to say in the title. Your writing is amazing, editing solid and the story is just probable enough to be endearing.

The sex is also mad hot

Loved it. I took my time with this story, playing each hand in my mind slowly over time. It really worked for me.

I'm new to so many ideas so I really appreciated the fact that the author addressed health & hygiene in a sexy way. It helped relieve my trepidation and enjoy the story even more.

Brilliant for so many reasons. A plot that kept giving, but was slow enough for the incremental ratcheting up of dares to be realistic. Releasing the tension of the secret hook up was inspired and recognising that the quiet ones can have some of the best imaginations because they need to. I wished my friends in uni were more like this, and also think the anal to other opening sex could still have had a sexy cleaning step.

Looking forward to more.

this story was waaaay toooo long.. It became boring to me.... There others who liked it so who am I to complain

Begining to end great fun sex. I am sure the complications will come if the story continues, but you have captured well one of those crazy times in life.

I really enjoyed this, I thought it was pretty well written and super sexy. The only thing I didn't like (being a queer woman) was the labeling of Alana as a lesbian, and the mention of "gold-star lesbians". By making Alana a lesbian who dates a man it makes some men think they can get other lesbians to "change their mind". And the idea of a gold-star lesbian can be harnful as it implies that lesbians who have been with men in the past are somehow less valid than ones who haven't.

But that's pretty picky of me for some written porn on the internet lmao.

Still a good story.

Dear god FINALLY someone mentions hygiene after anal. Always bugged the shit out of me no pun intended. Its just asking for infections

Loved this story - absolutely loved it.

Had me rock hard from pretty much the start right through to the last page. Your characters could generate a truck full of orgasms with further stories.

Given that you currently have a rating of 4.83, with 1.1 million views and over 1100 favorites, I kinda think it is presumptuous of me to think you need me to cast aspersions of that comment, but I just can’t let it stand without voicing my support of your work.

Not only is this one of the hottest stories I have come across here, the character of Alanna is absolutely one of the all-time hottest, and easiest to fantasize about, in my opinion.

Her character is playful, adventurous, knows more than me (can produce unexpected turn-ons seemingly at will) and loving at the same time, and gorgeous to boot, that just hits pretty much all my buttons!

Hope you are able to “come out of retirement” some day - would love to see more!

...have no suit ranking.

Some players play a house rule where there is some suit ordering. It's rare, but it happens.

But in standard Poker (regardless of whether it is draw, stud, hold 'em, or whatever variant you prefer), there is no suit ranking. Suits only matter to determine whether they are all equal (in which case the hand is a flush or a straight flush) or not.

Two hands that differ only in suits are equal in Poker.

... you relied upon the notion of multiple losers in a single hand numerous times.

In every card game I've ever played or seen all cards were ranked by face value and then by suit. Any ten - even the club - beats every nine - even the spade. And in all forms of poker where no hand has so much as pair of deuces, the hand with the highest card wins, and the hand with the lowest high card loses to ALL other hands.

I realize that there is such a thing as artistic license, but changing the rules of the key group interaction, i.e., the poker game, was a bit much. I concede that the progress of the game would have been slower - or you would have had to have f the players get bored and trigger some sort of cataclysmic ending.

I apologize if the problem was raised and the resolved by some earlier comment that I failed to read.

Really enjoyed your writing. I enjoy respectful, consensual sexual engagement. You did a nice job. Looking forward to reading some of your other material.

story perfectly captured a university-life fantasy

This was the thrid time I have read this story and it's better every time...thank you

Please make this an actual book.

Please keep me updated @ manbyronicchilde@gmail.com

I know im in the minority when it comes to this but i actually prefer the idea of Austin and Malena ending up in a monogamous relationship. I love the idea of the three together at the moment but I perosnally feel at some point their relationship will have to be defined properly. Dont get me wrong I love the idea of best friends falling in love and staying together but the fact Alanna has been out as a lesbian for years before this in combination with when they get together she still wants pussy whereas its clear that both A and M fancied each other from even the first story. Please dont think im saying I dont like your stories ive read all 3 of the pushing series and I can honest to god say it only comes second to one other series ive ever read in erotica. I love how your approaching it im just saying personally id prefer if Austin and Malena end up together, they are both innate monogamous characters even though they are enjoying what they have right now and I would just rather if those two came together as a monogamous couple and alannah continued her brilliant ways as a bonafide lesbian. Regardless I have truly enjoyed this series and look forward to the next installment if there was to be one.

Excellent story! Had to stop by the sixth chapter to attack my significant other. We played strip poker a couple of times with others, but never got to the dare part. Wish we had...

Just too long. Better to cut into chapters, each standing on its own, but with a "stay tuned for more" type sign-off.

This is a great story and very well written. It grabbed me and held my interest throughout the whole thing. I couldn't put it down once I had started it. Would strongly recommend reading it.

I don't get past the second.

This was an incredible story, so much better than the run of the mill strip poker. This was hot and so well told!

Stunning story ! Struggled to put it down and did wonder how long it was going to last , thought it may have got boring being so long but no ! How wrong was I ! Once again stunning !

Very much enjoyed this story, one of my absolute favorites with the dynamic you've evolved with Austin, Alanna, & Malena.

I still voted it a 5, but two comments:

1st - Totally cool if guy-on-guy isn't your thing... but it'd be really great if you could leave out the homophobia parts in the future. It didn't seem to serve the story in any significant way and really brings in some unhealthy aspects of masculinity. Almost all of the moments between Josh & Austin could be written with more inclusive masculinity without them actually getting it on. "Do you want to see my pinky winky?" "Nah, thanks though, I don't want to make Ricki wait." Josh & I grinned at each other and he moved on.

2nd - I really really really liked how adamant Ricki was about condoms, and it felt really weird when she suddenly seemed to not care about protected sex. All the other moments lacking safe sex and hygiene I could gloss over without distraction from the story (no safe sex talks about STI's, no cleanup per your note... I could suspend disbelief enough to move through those moments with being pulled out of the narrative... I realize its fantasy & fiction). But it was especially confusing and distracting to have such a reversal when you'd already established her as a safe sex conscious character.

Thanks for listening to some un-asked for critique. I wouldn't leave such a long message if I wasn't invested and engaged with your writing. :)

I would absolutely love to read more stories about the relationship of Alanna, Austin, & Malena. They are adorable together and having three monogamous individuals decide to start dating polyamorously with such a loving dynamic is really beautiful and heartwarming. I hope you are inspired to write more about these characters!

I applaud your work, and hope you will continue this series.

Thanks!

This story is very neatly written. I love how the writer wrote the whole plot and the chosen characters are very fit to the story itself.

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This has to be in the top five sex stories I’ve ever read. You are incredibly skilled. Five stars and a new follower, because I cannot wait to see what you have coming next.

I never commented here before, but it seems like a good time for a first. Absolutely marvelous work; I'd give it 6 stars if I could. I had never read a story that reached into the double-digit pages before (this one took me 3 hours!), and I was pleasantly surprised.

I'm amazed at how you could literally write a story based on die rolls; it feels like something quite close to RPG game master territory. I have to wonder, which result did you manipulate, if you still remember?

Great work, and I'm looking forward to reading your third story when I find the time.

You fucking nailed it. Erotic and exciting. Great work!

Should have had some Action between Austin and Josh.

Loved it, so erotic.Can't wait for future chapters.

What every guy dreams of. But how many of us have the super hot lesbian leaning best friend in our lives? I only knew of one lesbian in my entire neighborhood and even though she was so fucking fine yu could pop a nut just watching her luscious ass move away she had no leanings toward guys. Was openly hostile toward the male of the species. To the point of taking boxing lessons and using them on several guys who thought they could make a play.

Yeah, this is just such a nice fantasy though. I liked the story.

The emotional aspect combined with the concise physical acts makes this story a wonderful read. I sincerely hope that your tale (tail?) inspires experimentation for a lot of folks.

Thank you!

(bonus points for the hygiene PSA footnote)

Amazing writing. Kept my rapt attention. I couldn't stop reading. The author did a fantastic job. I love good erotica.

I have to admit that this is one of if not the best story I've read here yet. Please keep up the good work.

Absolutely loved it i almost cum in my shorts

Very well done. Great story line, and good grammar too - I loved it.

Keep it up, it was so good !

Blimey, that just kept going and getting hotter, crazier, sexier, and more imaginative. Well done!

Fantastic story! A LOT of fun!! :)

And thank you for the Author's Note 2. There are many authors who go Anal to Mouth or Anal to Vagina, with no cleaning in the middle. It's something that I noticed in your story. The fact that you touched upon the hygiene being missed, it at the end, in an author's note, says a lot about you. So while I still don't LIKE that the lack of hygiene is still in the story.. I will forgive you because you added the note. :)

5 star.

I am totally breathless as I finish reading this. Great job thank you

This was so fucking hot! I came so hard while reading it! My pussy is like completely drenched and I'm fingering it so hard but I need a rock hard dick to completely fill me up to make me feel completely satisified...aarrgghh this was so good

Incredibly long buildup, lol, but thank you so much for writing this. Like someone else said... after I came I kept on reading and came again :p

I saw myself as Malena in the story. Most of your characters seem so real, the emotional aspect so accurate. Thanks again... Incredibly hot, this is my new favorite!!!

Great story to this point, can't wait to see what happens next.

I read that story over about two weeks. Must have come eight or ten times.

Absolutely no question about it - the best story I have ever read.

man you can write !!! that was great .... I like how the actions have escalted slowly but in a hot as hell way :)

keep going on , we need more of that ;)

After reading all ten pages and the prequel Pushing Buttons, I can't wait for more. My favorite piece on the site.

That was amazing! Only the second story I've carried on reading after cumming in my history of literotica. Well done and thanks for an incredible adventure

i have been a Literotica fan for over 10 years and this is the best story I have ever read. Thank you.

Can't handle it- must have some more Alana she's just such an amazing character

Wonderful sexy and tittilating story. Good characters, well balanced and developed. Definately liked the game and the way it progressed. Made me wish l was one of the males, but then I more than likely, would never have survived a full day of arousal like that. Loved it!

Medicalpete.

This story was absolutely amazing and I can't wait to read more!

I came three times reading this, I kept pretending to be Malena! Great story

Hello all,

Thank you so much for all the wonderful comments. I really do appreciate them (especially the ones from the ladies ;) ) and it's comments like these that help give me a boost when I'm feeling down about my writing.

I do still have plans to continue the story for the whole house here, including playing with different POV's and situations. I'm not sure when the next installment will come out, but I'll be sure to let my mailing list know about it's progress.

In other news, Pushing Boundaries is currently up for voting in the 2015 Literotica Awards and I would really appreciate any support you guys and gals might throw my way.

Thanks again,

~ Break.

Holy fuck this was incredible. I read through the story while furiously using my vibrator imagining me in these scenarios. Thank you!!!

I don't think my brain could cope with this in reality. Great story though. GM

I had to stop halfway through the story and go fuck myself!!

dude, that was awsome. there was so much sex! took me two days tuo read it.

Outstanding, captivating and down right jaw dropping. Remarkably written, and what an imagination. I look forward to reading much more of your work.

It was a well told story! It was very realistic. The scenes were very clear and entertaining. I usually don't read stories this long from start to finish but this had me hooked! Thank you for sharing!

...was it good for you? :)

I found a relatively small number of questionable areas, in the light of the length, 33,639 words. There were not nearly enough to mar this awesome story, but nonetheless noticeable and noteworthy:

1. Hell to the no (WTF????)

2. light headed (light-headed)

3. fruit of the mother fucking loom. (Fruit of the motherfucking Loom)

4. God damn (Goddamn)

5. cocked and eyebrow (an)

6. Rugby (rugby)

7. cross legged (cross-legged)

8. two pair off the hop (top)

9. new I was safe (knew)

10. it's head (its)

11. it would be (a) surprise

12. self confidence (self-confidence)

13. cross legged

14. self satisfied (self-satisfied)

15. dieing (dying)

16. daisy duke (Daisy Dukes)

17. cose to me before (close)

18. white knuckled (white-knuckled)

19. up state (upstate)

20. your welcome (you’re)

21. god (God)

22. hair trigger (hair-trigger)

23. lube this baby up (-and) (a) bit

24. folded over (folded-over)

25. quickly got pack to our spots (back)

26. dildo's (dildoes)

27. chaffed (chafed)

28. double team (double-team)

29. over time (overtime)

30. rode Alanna and I (me)

31. sexytimes (sexy times)

32. One time (One-time)

33. king sized (king-sized)

I felt as if so many other readers had extolled the virtues of this writer/story a bit of constructive criticism or at least reflection was in order.

I hate to reiterate what so many have already said. This was very well written. Great story idea, character dev, use of grammar, all of it. Definitely one of the best I've read on Literotica.

I need more tomorrow please

I would say this is in the top ten stories I have read on this site in the years I have read on it. I would like to say the character development was stupendous and well fleshed. Plot evolution was I little on the erratic side but, in my opinion added a great flavor.

I have only one suggestion and it deals with the continuing story, I would like to see the deepening relationship between these three. I have lived the Master/slave relationships on and off for 16 years, even working as a professional Master for a few of them, and this is a perfect scenario for a trusting and fulfilling polyamorus trio. Perhaps with your ending, the three of them moving into the same room and openly being a threesome couple, the development of how their friends and roommates react to this, perhaps more. I am in no way trying to say you do not know where to take it, just saying where I, myself as a reader would be intrigued in the continuation.

I normally skip over the longer stories but I am extremely happy that i did not this time. AMAZING

But maybe one of the best I've read on here so far. I really enjoyed this and can't wait to see more of all of your series!

I'm a big fan of all your work (discovered you via FoF and read a lot of scifi/fantasy) but this cast and your narrative of their actions, feelings, and such are truly wonderful. I'm trying to extend the enjoyment by only reading 1 - 2 pages per week in hopes that you will have more ready when the curtain falls on this story. Maybe don't feel like you have to limit it to A, A, and sometimes M. You could explore the inexperience and confidence building of some other cast members. Anyway, I just had to pause and praise.