All Comments on 'Quaranteam - AU Ch. 05'

Very good again , had me confused to start with , so far the story has mainly been about Ty, So moving back to Ray had me unsure , thats all on me though.

However as much as this was a great read , Ty's team is a bit sexier.

Thanks again for the great story in a great QT universe. You obviously worked well with CP to get the Oz angle he had started into your story. Congrats.

One of the saddest but best chapter I have read on this site in a long time. 5 star just isn't a good enough rating scale C P and the QT Universe should be very happy your a part of the team

Thanks. Keep those chapters a-coming. Stay safe.

good update, very intense and emotional, survivor's guilt is definitely something not yet covered in any of the quaranteam story arcs...

Very good chapter. I too had to reread a bit of the earlier chapters before I remembered Ray well enough, but is just a feature of this format of having a chapter every once in a while. I generally reread bits of the previous chapter anyway whenever a new one appears, to get back in the story. Here that didn't really help, so I had to go back even further.

Could be interesting if someone did a QT story with a female main character, but I know that I can't manage that. So I just throw the idea out here, hoping someone else will pick it up and run with it.

Great Story. I don't normally rate any story but yours I had to. I agree with all the comments that I read at the end,; that were there after I finished your story. Looking forward to the rest of your QT stories.

another great chapter....agree with rockingtilidrop in that I was confused a bit at the start. On the next chapter you may want to list the members of each family. The one thing with the Quaranteam stories is keeping track of the ever growing lists of characters. And with multiple Quaranteam stories from different authors it is sometimes hard to keep track of which characters are in which authors stories.

I was a bit confused throughout this one. If you do time jumps which is what feels like happen in part this, at least gives us a heads up. Also can you listed the various teams going forward?

This is good work through.

Another great chapter. The emotions are so real

Fuck you for hiring ninja to sneak into my house and cut onions.

5 stars.

Binged your list so far. I think it's awesome work. Definitely well thought out to put it seamlessly into the greater universe without just rewriting a story. We are looking forward to your next chapter!

This was so powerful ....really brings the humanity of life after pandemic to the forefront. Thanks

This is what I have been waiting for from the Quaranteam Universe. Not looking forward to it. No. Not that. But the acknowledgement and revealing of the universal and crippling grief and emoutional trauma that Duo Halo would have across all societies and countries. Yes, this is a fantasy universe and we accept so many conceits - that's a given. But there are so many facets that can't be hand-waved away. Supply chains would whither and atrophy, entire industries and organisations would be damaged almost beyond the point of recovery - ok hand-wave and that's not there. But the human toll both mortally and emotionally cannot be overcome. Thank you for being the first that really exposes it. It helps make this more immersive. Thank you again. It was hard to read. Cannot imagine how much harder it would have been to write.

"Having people beside me, sisters, a partner; that makes me happy. If I got to have a couple of kids too? Couldn't be anything better."

Oh, I wouldn't worry about having kids, Simone my dear. The reality of the situation is that every government on the planet after a disaster like this would be heavily promoting people having a lot of kids, POSSIBLY even to the point of mandating that people HAVE to have kids, because whatever countries manage to rebound their populations the best over the next generation or two are going to be the countries that are poised to be the power players moving forward.

Excellent story, really enjoying it

Next chapter asap

Scores 5/5

Who put chopped onions in that letter?

Damn this one had tears in my eyes. Very well written!