by The_Licentious_Laureate
Enjoyed the installment, please don't wait 2 two months till the next one. Stay safe.
I really enjoy the Quaranteam universe. Thank you for another chapter of this story. It is fun to see what the different authors do with the framework and how they present what it looks like in other parts of the world.
I skipped a lot of the sexual intercourse. I am mainly interested in the story moving forward - and it scarcely did. Eating, taking a shower, and cleaning does not move the story forward either. Yawn.
Please introduce some conflict. Whatever. Have a comet impact next door.
I love all the Quaranteam stories. I also love The Bunker by one of you. And I still say you should have Ruairi playing games with the Garda lady since she is a gamer. She might end up being number 8.
Loving this one just as much as your other quaranteam story and can't wait for more of both of them.
I really enjoyed Ciara's perspective. Learning more about Rebecca was great especially the forensic accounting angle.
Thanks
Thank you for a great 2nd installment. You are doing a really nice job and I’m looking forward to seeing your storyline develop further. 5/5!
The American government is not going to let the government of Ireland takeover American owned businesses/ companies in Ireland after giving them access to the vaccine. The US government is not a charity. Even though some Democratics treat it as one. In the original Quaranteam, Phil mentions that America's debts were being cancelled by foreign countries all over the world for access to the vaccine. Other countries are offering the US government anything they want for access to the vaccine. So, the Irish government should/will not be gaining control of US backed companies/businesses that are located in Ireland.
Just my impression but it seems Ruairi is way too passive in the relationship. Feels like these two women are in control and he's just along for the ride. Doesn't feel like his character had enough development. No personality to speak of. Hope that comes out soon.
What Falstaff60 said. Ruairi is just the luckiest guy in the country. His career possibilities aside, he doesn't seem to have any drive or direction. It isn't that he is just not looking a gift horse in the mouth (Now there's an image for you), he seems to be just kicking back and accepting whatever happens to him. It may be that circumstances necessarily dictate his passivity, but it feels like details are missing. Having said that, it is not a major flaw in the story. There is plenty of time left to fill in gaps and add details. Please continue!!!!!