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good update, keep them coming.....pun intended lol

I love this story line. A very creative premise and interesting people. I was surprised Andy didn’t choose Natalie. I would have thought her interest in Elvish script and being a serious student would have appealed to him… and perhaps a knight in shining armor wish to remove her from the life she’s been forced to embrace in an effort to further her education. Maybe things will sort out in such a way he ends up with her anyway. Oh well, he did at least make one choice for himself.

Andy is a great guy and his heart is definitely in the right place, but it would be nice to see him getting a little more enjoyment from this strange new world he’s found himself in.

Yesterday I comment I wanted more of this story. And today it was here.

Thank you. Still want more of this great story.

Need to have a sex scene for each "chapter" at least. I mean the guy has a harem of women so he should be tapping at as much as he can. I can see the overall storyline and how the plot is developing along. Its nice that you have that. Don't forget to indulge in the sex part too. I love stories that have well developed plot lines like this.

won't lie the Captain Betsy Ross joke made me choke on my coffee XD

Love your interaction with Xander. I read each chapter the day it’s published. Absolutely a stellar series!

Uh, please ignore the advice to add a sex scene in every chapter, especially the short ones that are within the same day as the previous two chapters.

Just about read everything you have. I like your writing. 👍

This whole "choosing the others" arc really left a bad taste in my mouth.

Not a fan of the few picks. But it is what it is. Fertility lack of genetic defects is utmost importance when trying to repopulate a planet not personality, but I digress.

Moving along very well. No need to have a sex scene in each instalment provided the instalment s adding to the story. Great you brought in Fi, no I wonder who is going to reject becoming family?

Can’t lie, this was a much better story when people were paired based on survey choices and the women’s decisions. I get it, needs to be darker, too much happy is boring but…

The requests idea is making it worse imo. But your writing is great. So, I’ll very grumpily continue to read every single other story. Because excellent writing is hard to come by on this site. Keep it up.

As an Australian I object to the inference that the Mullet can ever be out of fashion!

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I really hope one of these girls says no and they bring Jade on. I get why he wants the older doctor lady for when the kids come, but it would be much better to have both. The doctor who has a lot of wisdom but is decidedly middle aged and who knows when her energy starts slowing down AND the younger woman who you know is also great with kids but is YOUNGER and has energy for days. Realistically I think they need both. With how many women he has it wouldn't be surprising at all for Andy to have 50 or more kids by the time he pops off this mortal coil.

Andy had literally simply relied all the various information.

SHOULD BE:

Andy had literally simply RELAYED all the various information.

Now I got that damn theme song stuck in my head