by CorruptingPower
Hey there, really loving the series so far. Cant wait to see what other Hijinks Andy's wives get him into next. Dont know if this is intentional or not, but you have Eric and Lily described as 2nd gen Japanese but they have Chinese surnames. I honestly cant remember if this was something you covered in the story yet or if it was just a typo. Hope to see the next chapters soon. D121.
I love this story and am looking forward to many more chapters. I am wondering why you reduced the sex which isn't going to get the women knocked up and added a baffling number of new characters.
Thanks for this. With this many characters it is hard to keep them straight. I hope you do this periodically as new characters arrive. Otherwise loving the story.
Holy cow! I had no idea the cast of characters had gotten so long. Of course I focus on Andy and his house. I can’t wait for the next chapter(s). Great story!
Thank you so much for this. Love the series but was finding it hard to keep the characters straight at times. We are getting old.
I hope this is like a play with several acts and this is only the first intermission
Nice dude, but Dave's just this guy, you know?
Nice little nod to Hitch Hikers Guide To The Galaxy you put there!!!
Common misconception about female anatomy...the larger number is not always better. 5'1" tall Hannah with a 44" chest (this number is measured around the ribcage, UNDER the boots, would make her shaped like a barrel - definitely NOT a cheerleader
Lily Wu sounds like a Chinese not Japanese named woman, unless if she is half Japanese and half Chinese.
Ty for this.
I spent 20 minutes after Andy posted his list of choices in ch 27, re-reading the previous 3 chapters. Both to re-learn the chosen and more importantly, trying to figure out who the hell Fiona was.
I'm loving the series and your works!
Fiona should be on there? Nitpicking. Amazing series and writing in general, as usual. Thanks!
Thank you so much for writing this short chapter yet so important for us readers!
I was OK with all of the characters until the last chapter when I realized during the interview process that I had forgotten the backgrounds of three or four of the women of the house. Your decision to make this chapter to remind us of the players was brilliant!
Besides this, I am loving the story and look forward to each and every chapter coming forward.
Thank you for taking the time and effort for sharing this with us.
Sincerely,
Daniel
"Still slightly recovering from abusive treatment at Andrew Covington's home.". I haven't gone back to check but...Arthur Covington? Or did I completely miss they have the same first name?
Good summary but it's missing the new people coming into Andrew's house. Given you have lusted Brooke for Xander's house, it would have been consistent to include Fiona and the others. Sorry to complain, but I very much enjoyed the quality of the summary for those you did include. Also, it would have been cool to include more complete statistics for each of the women.
That said, the summary and overall story is GREAT! Thank you!